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i'm not saying this not because he's bad or something, but the author was tweaking saying that a boy from uchiha clan have dogwater chakra reserve less than average people, like its not making any sense whatsoever.😭😭
It made sense. Even proper ninja academy students needed a few years to master the three basic techniques. He, an outsider, couldn't expect to succeed after just a few imitations; that would be wishful thinking.
Anime & Comics · Belamy_2024
nah spidey could defeat them, he just holding back his strengt a lot!
Me? Would I stand a chance against them? Maybe, if I let the symbiote take full control of my body, like in Spectacular Spider-Man. But that option didn't sit well with me.
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
if even after all of this shit and he still struggling to defeat like 2 stages above his cultivation i'm gonna demand my wasted time back reading this 😭😭😵💫.
Over the past five years, he has been honing his Dou Qi, tempering his muscles and bones, and nourishing his meridians every moment. With the help of the methods given by the system, he has honed his Dou Qi to be extremely pure and condensed like fine iron.
Anime & Comics · _anonimous_
typical plot induced stupidity...
However, in order to build an unparalleled foundation and to go further in the future, he stayed in the Ninth Stage of Dou Zhi Qi for five long years.
Anime & Comics · _anonimous_
bro soul is soo garbage it suck the potential out of the body..{¤◇¤}..
However, as soon as he started forming the hand seals, he realized that his chakra was completely depleted, not enough to support another attempt at the Clone Technique.
Anime & Comics · Belamy_2024
bro the author was smoking something when writing this bs, like how you can be an uchiha, a literal clan descent from alien on another dimension that make eating planet look like a normal breakfast and don't have enough chakra to make 1 normal clone (this is not even shadow clone).smh😥🙂↔️🤡.
However, as soon as he started forming the hand seals, he realized that his chakra was completely depleted, not enough to support another attempt at the Clone Technique.
Anime & Comics · Belamy_2024
yeah like a little bit of research wouldn't hurt.
One advantage over the original Flying Thunder God technique was that the spell engraving was extremely fast
Anime & Comics · Senatus
I can tell why that fat fuck was obsessed with Lyanna now.
Book&Literature · MrPlotThickens
base rasengan? no, OG naruto learn that shit in 3 days! without shadow clone method, the latter however is a different animal.
Both the Rasengan and the Flying Thunder God were extremely difficult techniques, even with the help of shadow clones, to speed up his progress.
Naruto: Different Path
Anime & Comics · Saitama_Blast