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I am confused , where is the story going It's only been 23 chapters and he ended voldemort and major death eaters. Story is going on which direction 1 . Mc dark wizard vs Harry , Dumbledore Suggestion - you can include other wizarding worlds here , like Grindelwald escaping or there existing more powerful wizards than Dumbledore Because I think the war veterans and powerful nations and wizards will appreciate mc's action as he stopped a problem ( voldemort) before it occurred As due to Grindelwald war other countries, should be more proactive in dark wizard problem and dark magic vs light magic things As Grindelwald war didn't effect British much , they can be showed as backward While other countries developed Harry Potter World has huge potential as you can add (ancient magic from the games, goblins , vampire elders, fairy, demons , mages other old wizard living in isolation) About the story: Now of course Harry and others wouldn't understand why he take such hard decisions as there was no war So they don't understand how dangerous the situation with voldemort was , (I mean in 6 and 7 year muggleborn and there families killed were indiscriminately, and kidnapping them for slavery and what not Hogwarts was like mini deatheaters playground, ministry was ruled by voldemort) , just it shows that a whole nation was conquered by 1 man and his 500 something followers( I don't know the exact no.as we don't know the total no. Or demographic division of wizarding world) but it just shows how weak the ministry was that after Amelia, and Dumbledore death everything collapsed. He should show them how close to losing the war they were previous time, if Lily potter sacrifice /ritual didn't stopped the war( originally ex minister dismissed death eaters as threat, voldemort as only a hoax, then only in later stages of war they start taking situation seriously when damage was already done, but they never arrested people on basis of dark mark or interrogate any pure blood properly, I mean people's were getting killed and they were worried about not offending nobles) Mc should start taking economic control of wizarding world and newspapers, as it is safe and effective method, without anyone pointing dark lord tag at him Mc doesn't have a noble title , so either he start a revolution to reshape the wizarding world or expose there secret to British muggle govt. And work with them (which I think is unlikely) Because mc doesn't have a strong circle (economically or politically) who would fight for him Here his own school teachers are not trusting him ,as they should be neutral in this situation and as we know about wizarding world they will believe in whatever the prophet tells them And I can't understand where does snape( hypocrite )get any write to judge someone when he himself has done more cruel things ( as we never knew about his work as death eaters other than prophesy I mean he was half blood so he would have to show his worth in front of death eaters)

Hey how much money did she win Surely there was prize for winners and betting if dueling is an international sports

crossing the wall and serving Starks as a vessel is logically good option considering white walkers But the hatred towards freefolk is a gone be a problem( as there is a lord whose daughter was kidnapped by freefolk if I am not mistaken) this hate is centuries old I don't think northern lords will agree to just forget it ( as we have seen jon get killed by people for this) , then Blake is half walker himself which will get him killed , is freefolk will give away there freedom Then they have to deal with South wars. Then robb and catelyn politically stupid decisions And they have to provide army for southern wars when they know white walkers are bigger problem The main problem will be independence freefolk live beyond wall because they don't want to live under any southern Kingdom ( Targaryen) So, why will they give up there freedom to people who will only treat them as savage( as we know to this day people of South believe and treat north and Starks like savages after centuries) So , isn't it better you go to some island ( sotheryos, essos , etc) and establish kingdom there and return to help fight white walkers with better preparation ( army, weapons, money) Just a suggestion .

Is he gonna write songs also As there are so many good songs he can write

What will be knull exact goals -- killing everyone or revenge or world domination? How is he going to achieve it - the hard way or smart way as we have seen his increase in intelligence by his use of traps. And will he do something about his weakness from light , as after being imprisoned he should start thinking about countering this weakness

When will he make necrosword/ all black?

Does he going to tell Peggy about his dark side and hydra. Because if she learn from someone else then it will be bad . I think he should come clean and tell most of his secrets atleast Because if he is going to marry her then trust is important.

I liked the story But why does most si want to be hero or villian . The can just be neutral . Or make an organisation and do heroic work legally. Like. The chronicles of elizah by haiztam . I mean hero life is so chaotic and dangerous. The story is great keep writing[img=recommend][img=recommend]

There is a marvel fanfic on web novel the chronicles of Elijah you can take some inspiration from there for future and make mc more self confident .thanks for the story.😁

Thanks