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followed is repeated

The group followed followed right after him.They hurriedly moved at fast pace which made sinking into the ground avoidable. 

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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while I'm interested in what "loud sounds of collusion" may be. it should be collision.

Endric's wave of telekinetic wall rushed forward and slammed into the creature from the side multiple times causing loud sounds of collusion to reverberate across the vicinity.

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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residue should be residual instead.

At the other location where the vertigo troops engaged the cult members, explosions and powerful collisions still rang across the place. Viltru had moved his battle with both family branch leaders further across the ocean so the others would not be affected by the residue energy of their attacks.

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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devise.

"I still need to find out what he's up to and device the best way of killing him..." Gustav voiced out with a contemplative expression.

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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it should be precinct. not precent.

"Boss Danzo," Gustav muttered underneath his breath as he saw the cuffs of restriction on his wrist.

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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should be you're as opposed to "your too stiff" as is written

Prince Renz glanced at his younger brother and smiled reassuringly. "Our army is strong and with Commander Ramiel leading us, our victory is almost guaranteed. Just relax and loosen your muscles. Your too stiff." He chuckled at the end of his words.

The Herb King

The Herb King

Eastern · Malignant

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permission to eat a persimmon...

Communication needed to be made before Logan could come across. However, this time, unlike when Quinn had gone, they did not inform the king or ask for persimmon. Quinn felt like he needed to last time due to entering the fourteenth castle, which was a big deal.

My Vampire System

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

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