Ooh, is "Criminal Couple" their ship name? Or is it Jessane? Shaneye?
The Criminal Couple bolted into action. Together they sprinted through the twisting halls, past the dinosaur exhibits, to the nearest door. Shane snatched his crow bar from his back, popped the door open, and shoved his girlfriend out. "Go!"
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Oh no! Things just went down. How will they recover from this?
ch 21 A Step Too Far
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I mean, if she was in a desperate situation and would die if she didn't rob people, that would be different. But this is sin. Jess will have to confront herself at some point.
"Thank God," she breathed a whisper.
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Jess, sweetheart, you know God doesn't approve of this, right?
"Thank God," she breathed a whisper.
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*squee!* Oh my gosh it's finally happening!
Slowly Tony filled his lungs with the evening air. He was still holding her hand. Was it sweaty? His hands were so much bigger than hers.. and rough. What if she didn't like this? Was she really ready? Did she want this? He did, oh he did, but what if..? "Do you," he blurted out suddenly. She glanced over and waited patiently, "Maybe.." he dropped her hand to wipe his on his pants.
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Ironclads is a great gang name. They sound threatening already. I hope these guys show up in the story at some point!
Her new cellmate glanced to her and sighed, shaking his head. He didn't have to talk, but he thought, at this point she'd keep going till he caved. He sat up and bit his nails. He could be in for multiple things, but he figured he'd lead with the most obvious. "I was a member of Ironclads." He chuckled as her eyes widened. His father's gang was well known in their city.
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Oh, Jess, always smiling. I love you. You are adorable. I want to give you a big hug and tell you to stop robbing people because you deserve better.
"Oo~! Look at those flowers!" she pointed excitedly at a cluster of sunflowers and daisys, "This is a cool route." She said with a smile. Shane shrugged.
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This is exactly what running feels like!
Any other time and she'd be bouncing off the walls at that. She gulped in air and shook her head,"Woo," she exhaled then began laughing breathlessly. Squeezing it into her mouth, she chugged some water. She leaned against the back of the bench as she stared at the blue sky.
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Aww, this so sweet and exciting and scary all at once!
She took her ballcap off and combed through her stringy velvet hair as she walked back into the shop. This wasn't Jesseye's first relationship, but she only now understood what it meant to truly have a crush. All her insides were mushy and muddled and hot and sweet and nervous and, and... She was enamored with him. And terrified. These feelings could ruin everything if he found out. He would no doubt draw away from her and all she hoped for would be gone. She'd have nothing. Again. How could they be so high after only a few months together?
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I want to see the scene with the van! How did they find it? Was it easy or hard? Have they done this before? This could be a great introduction to what kind of criminal activity they do - and how good they are. This scene could really be exciting. But all I have now is questions! [img=update]
The redhead laughed nervously, but her word proved to be true. They two girls tracked down Shane's van and drove it home only an hour before the man himself showed. "Heeyy!" Jesseye greeted her friend excitedly, strangling him in a bear hug,"You made it!"
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I hope this updates again soon. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest. Good Christian romance is hard to find, and most of it is so bland. This is such a unique conflict, with danger and excitement!
A Dream of Crime
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