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Those webs of flesh between finger and thumb have been taking a beating lately. Most of the recent fights have seem to tear them open.
The web on his hand that was holding his saber almost tore apart as Dong Cheng realized that Luo Zhelan's attacks were much stronger than the last time.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
It's even harder if they don't watch the recordings. None of the missions that Shun has turned in were watched by elders and the outer disciples that watched them fast forwarded through quite a bit in some of the missions.
''Middle rank 9 of the Nascent Soul? Let's see how strong you really are. Perhaps I shouldn't conceal my Dao of Time any longer either.''
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
Well they still have to do personal missions once every three months. And nothing is stopping them from taking on more missions if they want/need to. I'm not sure if faction missions are mandatory on an annual mission either. But again, they can take on more faction missions as well.
However, nobody knew that the reason why Liu Mei, Xingyi, Jiang Chen, and Bai Longtian, had all managed to breakthrough to the late stages of the Nascent Soul so quickly instead of having to spend a few years on the peak of rank 6 in the Nascent Soul, was mostly thanks to Shun Long's 'Barrier-piercing pill'.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
Props to you, you correctly identified 60% of the monsters on Shun Long's team. That's a passing grade! And since a lot of people have overlooked Shun & Co before; this dude's grade would even be higher if we graded it on a bell curve. Too bad it won't help him though.
In his eyes, Bai Longtian who had simply comprehended a rare dao like the Dao of the Buddha, and Shun Long whose cultivation was still at the early-stages of the Nascent Soul, were the only people among his opponents that he didn't have to worry too much about.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
My guess is that there are two different tests. One test designed for the central continent, or at least the portion the Holy Sect controls and a second test for the outer continents. That's how a 1000 passed one set of tests and this set will only have a 100 or so that pass. Could explain why the others have a lot higher cultivation in only two months. Not everyone can cultivate as fast as Shun Long. They simply started at a higher level due to being exposed or related to various families and factions from the central continent, as well as the higher qi purity.
Hehehe, however, the truth is, that these disciples in front of you only entered the sect 2 months before you!''
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
How stupid can you be? First you initially low ball the dude you need. And then you try to screw him for a single pill that might be worth a couple thousand stones at maximum when you need him for something that can net millions of stones?
He thought that he had managed to secure the assistance of the peak rank 5 black panther for their guild's mission, but everything seemed to have changed in just one hour.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
I can address the other thing I mentioned in a flashback though, so I'll be doing so instead. The other stuff is just to fix grammar issues.
ch 72 Callum's Enticement
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
The issue is that there seems to be a big drop off in comments after the quest, bonding, and castle. One issue that's been brought up is the 'brainwashing', so I need to clear that up in order to help retain readers past that point. I also probably rushed to the castle after his huge level ups a little too fast as well, but that's harder to fix. So I'll just work on the addressing the perceived brainwashing.
ch 72 Callum's Enticement
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
It's a giant snake with some dragon characteristics.
ch 69 Guard Duty
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
I couldn't imagine how murky that would have looked. Hopefully you removed the tannins first and didn't find out after the fact!
Callum hoped his adjusted method worked; normally the bark would be boiled, pulped, and then strained to give a concentrated tannin solution. However, he lacked something to boil the water.
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
If he keeps this up, he might be in the running for a peace prize . . .
"Umm, yes. In a fashion, I guess I did. Primrose, you don't have to say Sir or Mister to me all the time. Just my name is fine. Also, could you pull up all of the upgrades that will increase the capacity of the castle that can be done with our current resources?"
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
I'm trying. Hopefully I pull it off.
ch 62 Exploits
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
It covers this a bit in the previous chapter, although I didn't give the full details. The different races get their own attributes when they level. For instance dwarves get extra constitution and strength, but mighty suffer a little in dexterity. So he got attributes aside from his farmer class that was nerfing his int, willpower, and charisma in addition to giving stats elsewhere. One of the paragraphs in the previous chapter starts off with "If he reset though" and covers it some. Then he leveled up from 19 to 24 and the rest is due to the bond with Amarok.
ch 33 Don’t Wake Up The Grumpy Wolf
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
When I show stats, what is in parenthesis is how many attributes are bonus attributes. So his strength is 65 right now, and 5 of that is from Amarok.
ch 33 Don’t Wake Up The Grumpy Wolf
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
Gotta love their thought process here. She's a traitor to her race, but they're also denouncing her as a half blood who should've been killed as a kid. You can't have it both ways.
"We should have killed you when you were still a child," one of the Archmages spat on the ground. "Filth of the Elven Race."
Reincarnated With The Strongest System
Fantasy · Elyon
I explained this better in another chapter comment you left. Basically, I didn't write down what I was thinking regarding the bond. And that's on me, I'll fix it later. But, the bond was forming naturally based on their previous interactions and it had nothing to do with the quest. The quest merely delayed formalizing the bond that was there. Just like Callum had a choice of rejecting the formal bonding, Amarok also had a choice to accept it or not. He accepted, but had to wait for some time before Callum was belatedly offered the choice.
ch 32 Rewards!
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
Sorry, I can see why you would feel that. Thank you for the feedback, I can see how I didn't make that clear. Later, I'll add a paragraph regarding the bond in order to clear up what was in my brain but didn't make it into words. Basically, the bond was delayed because of the quest. So it formed naturally by their interactions over the previous weeks, but the formal bonding didn't happen until after the quest was over. Regarding the castle, yeah I might have rushed that too soon after the quest finished. I'm a first time author, so I've been making mistakes and learning as I go.
ch 35 A New Era Dawns
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
the enemy were outnumbered, minos' soldiers had the numbers advantage.
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The Rise of the Black Plain
Fantasy · RVN_1998
He'll focus on other things as time passes. Early on it's a big motivator though.
"I will exact vengeance upon those who conspired against my parents and I. Before my ancestors and the gods themselves, this I swear upon my soul!"
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Fantasy · seth4bucks
I wonder what goes into selecting sect elders if this dude is a Dao Emperor and is still just an inner disciple.
Unfortunately, Yang Hui didn't have a chance to spar with this greatest genius of the Holy sect just yet, since Chen Kang was already a core disciple whose status was even higher than that of most inner court Elders.
Monarch of Time
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian