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just awesome is what i would describe this story as! the character the pacing the interaction, i love it! keep going author. this is the best!

If you want my genuine advice then scrap this novel in this site. And do a rewrite from the beginning. readers won't have the patience to read the story to see what changed. they don't know you or your story. save all of the chapters and then only use it as a guide of how the story progresses and write with a new style. i can see you are putting effort. but it's perfectly clear that you are a greenhorn. 1- scrap this novel. and save it on your pc. 2-use the saved novel as a guide to how the story progresses 3-reasearch good novels. Better stories earn money so that could be your motivation. 4-change your style of writing, again research everything. You need to have patience. 5- post your novel on scribblehub too 6- Interact with the readers but don't seem desperate 7- The most important advice (don't give a shit about anything i said and continue to do what you want) coz u do what you want to do

You can research other's story which are very popular. In scribblehub, royalroad or in webnovel too. take a pen and a paper and start thinking about why this story is doing good. remember in this site if you can present a story in a good way readers generally can excuse the grammar. everything you are writing is too constant, there should be fluctuations and your synopsis sucks. study the synopsis, story, style of other sucessful novels. You learn from the mistakes. after you write a story, keep your emotions down and read it from a reader's perspective. do i want to read this, is it good, are there better stories, is the character complex? etc One advice i will give you is research the popular stories. read each sentence and identify what this sentence addsto the story. donot make the reading monotonous. play with the emotions of readers as much as you can.