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Your fine I just feel like if you went back and gave the story a rewrite it could attract a lot of pension and likes you know it’s just a story seems like it would do well with more of a slow burn feel

It started off as a good story, but I feel like you kind of just skewed off from the original story before he went into the high class dungeon became completely crazy for a bit after that, I just feel like the story kind of was all over the place. I feel like if you rewrite it and stick to the story that you were doing before everything got out of hand it be a better story.

Can’t wait to read more seems like this it going to be a good book just got caught up and I’m excited for the tri wizard tournament can’t wait to see how this turns out