Webnovel Author: ZeroSerei - Novel Collection

ZeroSerei

2yr

Replied to Wateristubeg

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ch 0 1 Prologue: In The Beginning

The Epic Of Fire: A Battle of Beliefs

Fantasy · SereiZero

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

First chap is a bit confusing with the narration, but it's pretty good apart from those issues

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The Crystals

Fantasy · PrinceofLightning

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

Furara, there is a time to do free hand and a time to use a staff to obliterate a demon general. Trust Hanjiro for once

“ No! I don’t want to abandon my freehand magic to staff just because of this.”

Here I Am In This RPG World

Eastern · Haroldtigre

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

let me hand you a power stone

ch 0 -1 Prologue: Looks like I got Scammed?

My Organic Life Experience of Living with a Plant Girl

Fantasy · Dualpen

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

How did you do the italics

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My Organic Life Experience of Living with a Plant Girl

Fantasy · Dualpen

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

Furara is adorable AAAAAAAA

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Here I Am In This RPG World

Eastern · Haroldtigre

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

"Yeah I'm hungry, what are we having for lunch?" Answer: You Two

You two…..

Here I Am In This RPG World

Eastern · Haroldtigre

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

Need more of Furara, especially her breaking out of those robes.

ch 0 3 Save Log 2: A Cat Shall Stalk Me For Nothing

Here I Am In This RPG World

Eastern · Haroldtigre

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

I would prefer if you added spaces in between dialogue for easier reading but all in all, this is pretty decent man!

ch 0 2 First Day

Just happened

Urban · Zenande

ZeroSerei

2yr

Replied to Rayene_Blue

it isn't a grammar error, don't worry! it's something wrong with my head for even imagining it given the context

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Entangled : The Heart Of A Warrior

Urban · Rayene_Blue

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

Either this sounds wrong or I'm just really really messed up

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Entangled : The Heart Of A Warrior

Urban · Rayene_Blue

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

I will attempt to be the first comment in this chapter because I can : ) also, I think this chapter is great! I can see why those reads poured thanks to all that quality

ch 0 1 Prologue

Entangled : The Heart Of A Warrior

Urban · Rayene_Blue

ZeroSerei

2yr

Replied to Ferjenni

Anytime madame, was a good read after all and it deserves praise :)

Funny, lighthearted, and enjoyable. Man this book hits different, but to be honest it has a lot of things it has to improve on like its grammar and the way it presents itself. The narration itself and the way the narrative is presented was good with the switching perspectives, but I don't think replaying the same scene serves the purpose that well... not like I could say much about that in my book, but all in all this has been a pretty stellar experience

THE SECRETARY

Urban · Precious_Onwe

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

who killed Tyre?? wait who was Tyre?????

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THE SECRETARY

Urban · Precious_Onwe

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

I love how she fails to insult mid-sentence

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THE SECRETARY

Urban · Precious_Onwe

ZeroSerei

2yr

Commented

this could have been shown through their rooms, but I guess this does serve it's purpose

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THE SECRETARY

Urban · Precious_Onwe

ZeroSerei

2yr

Posted

I will be direct to the point here... I see the effort, but readers, where were you? Seriously though, this book deserves way more reads than it should have. It's light, crisp, and good. While it isn't quite original as other concepts or aspects, the way it is presented, the manner of characters bouncing off each other is just a nice taste. This thing is the Pringles of story writing so where you guys at?