DaoistXYHIO3

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RIP great Grandpa, and menthor!

ch 0 4 Explore the yet Unseen

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Fantasy · ludoziel0303

DaoistXYHIO3

3yr

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I really liked the inc. altho some writing improvement is possible I think. Wishing author to continue fighting, good luck. Also I found the story very interesting, look forward to continuation!

Lord of Twilight

Fantasy · SmokelessSpacey

DaoistXYHIO3

3yr

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The novel is a total thrill. Warning! Will devour your soul on first chapter, and won't let U take it back. The titles of chars are great too.

Cursed To Die A Million Times

Urban · SpearPointPen

DaoistXYHIO3

3yr

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Liked the golem fight very much! Author breaks the trend of golem being solid.

ch 0 2 A city of crime. Sail on!

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Fantasy · ludoziel0303

DaoistXYHIO3

3yr

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One man army... Great idea for main char imao!

ch 0 1 Prologue

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Fantasy · ludoziel0303

DaoistXYHIO3

3yr

Posted

The concept of one man army is great! I always waited for a lecture in such creative theme. I think U'll find it worth of Your time. I only fear the author will run out of ideas.

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Fantasy · ludoziel0303

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