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The book is full of fillers and unnecessary info dumps. It became too irritating to read all the fillers used to increase the word count. I hope the author can take constructive criticism and not delete comments which offer criticism.

that's rough, i hope it's all ok now...

4 months of stockpiling is enough in my opinion 😅😅

Why did you stop writing? ......................................................................................................................... It was such an interesting concept. I hope you start writing again.

I just don't understand what is the end goal for Felix? It feels like he is just getting led around by others. He doesn't even have a purpose. i would say he is a string doll doing the things the primo tells him

left her ALIVE*

The MC of this novel is a moron and a huge hypocrite. I could ignore the dumb things the MC did at the start of the novel but when he left the demon girl because she fuc*ed with him made me drop this novel. At first he claims to be a Hero of Justice saving people in need, killing bad people but in the ocean world when he meets the demon girl he doesn't kill her! Ok I understand that he was not strong enough then but he could kill her afterwards He didn't even think of killing her afterwards even when he knew that she had killed many innocent people. WHY? Because she started flirting with MC and MC gladly left her. I hate the hypocrite the MC is you shouldn't have tried to make the mc hero of justice if you couldn't even keep the facade going.

The only thing I dislike about this novel is that the MC is super stupid. He does such basic mistake even in the late part of the story. If not for the plot Armor he would have died 100 times.