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Not bad novel, and the translate is good. Keep going and good job...........................................................................

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interesting. at first the novel was just okay nothing more but when it reach the point of being the first cultivator it was very interesting and I don't remember a novel were the MC is searching and discover his way of cultivating develop his method and become the first one, it's a nice idea. I think you should change the Synopsis and put the idea of becoming the Ancestor of all the cultivators it will be more interesting and attractive to the readers and if you develop the idea of being the first cultivator very well your novel will be unique. good job and keep going :)

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