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Pleasee.. they're not even rank 1.. Exagerating much?
Her body froze, unable to move an inch as overwhelming fear engulfed her mind. She trembled uncontrollably, helplessly watching them move their hands in unison, delivering a tremendous blow. The air crackled with energy, the ground splintered, and a deafening roar filled her ears, drowning out her scream. Each of the twelve warriors struck with the power of a falling star, their blows converging into a single, devastating impact that shattered her defenses and hurled her backward, her body crumpling like a rag doll.
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Really?.. He attacks the tip of a sword with his palm?... How stupid is this?
She didn't understand what he said, but it was too late to back out now. Time seemed to slow down for both of them as they locked eyes. Oliver extended his palm towards her, meeting the tip of her sword. Everything seemed to slow down at that moment before their eyes.
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
A shorter chap with more dragged out content. Truly a waste of money like others say. It's not even interesting.. just pathetic fights between 6 yr olds.
ch 74 Fighting with wounds! Time to test that out...
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Check all the biggest serial killers known, and you'll see a correllation between their behaviour and their pasts. Most of it comes from trauma. Rather, there are very few who just decide to do it. Idk where you took your info from, maybe you should read some actual books cause what you said invalidates human psychology to the fundemental level. They gain pleasure from it, but what causes them to do it is the need for control or other things that they lacked. That seed is planted from childhood. You really don't understand human nature, i can tell from your mindset. It lacks depth and maturity.
ch 12 Step-mother 3
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Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
He is basically forcing himself on others, constantly.
The anti-hero is the one who is neither villain nor hero. He is most neutral type, not abusive or violent, mostly uncaring and selfish. And technically speaking, most serial killers were abused in their childhood. Most of villainy comes from abusive childhoods, idk where you got your info from, but people don't randomly commit mass murders just cause they feel like it. Also, any being can have redeeming qualities, even Bundy had his charm. What you're creating is an absolute garbage being who finds pleasure in bringing pain, regardless of who it is.
ch 12 Step-mother 3
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Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
Those are part of the Vampire lineage so he cannot add any of them. He is stuck to low level human bloodline, so none of the bloodline abilities will be recovered.
Of course, abilities like Absolute Kinesis and Absolute Step still wouldn't be included since they would only be unlocked once he becomes a Great Sage, not that it would change anything. Nux could always add them once they are unlocked.
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Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
When most stories are copy pasted from AI just to have decent english, you will start to notice recurring themes. If i'm paying to read a story, i'm not gonna pay for free AI, and yes, for me it affects the story. It's noticeable once you're read enough, and once you start to see it, it becomes annoying. Like i said, I will point out the things I dislike. Don't really care how others feel about it.
As she moved with graceful poise, she exuded an aura of tranquility and inner strength, her presence evoking the serene beauty and silent power of the moon itself.
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Fantasy · Melon_daomaster_9
And why should i care? I'll complain about what i dislike, you should too.
As she moved with graceful poise, she exuded an aura of tranquility and inner strength, her presence evoking the serene beauty and silent power of the moon itself.
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Fantasy · Melon_daomaster_9
Why is she acting as if this is the first time she did this? Wasn't she completely conquered by him when he awakened her bloodline? She shows a bit too much reluctance for that.
Each movement felt like a betrayal of everything she believed in - love, family, honor...but what choice did she have? She had to protect her son at all costs, even if it meant sacrificing herself.
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Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
What about Luna?.. She is better than her daughter.. Then there's these other women.. Why even go to a sect when he has so many women here and a system?..
The one servant he will take is Lina and the other one will be this girl.
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Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
Wow.. to think the worst spirit root was voted on..I guess the readers are brain dead.
[ Ding! You have awaken a new talent: flawless shadow form ]
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Eastern · Cultured_Daoist69
The fights seemed too blown out of proportion and dragged out. Rather than writing so many chaps for such simple fights between toddlers, you're better off condensing them. The main issue is that they're too long. The second one is that MC spent 2 chaps in same fight before even using any skills, instead of focusing on finishing things quickly. He was against 2, and he wasted time and stamina in a forest of monsters... just to drag time. Should have used his skills from the start and went for finishing blows, not jump around with a sword and an axe. You're writing fights between rank 0, 6 year olds man.. How fun do you think those fights can be? Focus on the plot more and advance time, don't drag things in first 50 chaps with fights between toddlers.. spent 4 chaps on it too.. As if it were some final villain arc... nobody actually cares about 6 yr olds fights, we want things to advance.
ch 71 Bringing out the Axe!
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Fantasy · WinterDragon_1