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Honestly all I can say is thank you for this story. I have greatly appreciated reading it and while I am sad it is over I hope your next work is just as good. thank you for your hard work!

I don't think so. he is a slum resident thus he isn't expected to have awakened. maybe if he were a noble or a guard known for having enough money or position to have a awakening crystal but not someone from the slums. I'm pretty sure regular people don't have mana signatures either so it makes sense.

so he has 2 passive that give him 50% damage but yet he can barely do a level 15 dungeon? that doesn't make sense. not to mention the other numerous passives he has. also ne was never given the immune to physical damage passive when he killed the shadow boss after entering the second town. for someone so OP he sure isn't op at all. it makes no sense.

he also forgot to give the mc the passive for killing the shadow boss.

I am liking this so far but I have some points I would like to say. 1. you need to explain things more. why would he sell bronze skills books? was it because they would give random skill books like you somewhat hinted too? 2. this all feels a bit rushed. it feels like it's slightly too fast and needs to slow down some. I dont mean it needs to go at a snail's pace, but I needs to feel more natural and not fastfowarded. 3. small mistakes. some mistakes like the she instead of he in this chapter, the wrong name with the passive he got from the boss last chapter, and other things like this. they need to be corrected for the best reading experience. great work so far, it just needs a little polish!

honestly he just needs to kill zhang and see if he can acquire his talent.

I really hope that when he kills people with talents he gets their talents. that would be awesome!

great chapter! [img=recommend]

Great chapter! [img=recommend]

Great chapter! [img=recommend]