Xur_1603

1yr

Replied to Xur_1603

For saying Alise is Pyrrha’s reincarnation is more so for Jaune to make up for that regret well also giving him a win cause honestly everyone in RWBY is really getting constant L’s it’s almost unbearable

ch 0 2 Chapter 1: Anomaly in time

Danmachi: Knight and Justice

Anime & Comics · Paxkun

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter. The way you make him go back in time well showing us RWBY and I’m assuming Neo are going to be there later is nicely done. Along with the twist of having ever afters realm coming to Genkai is fantastic. For a partner or partners it really depends on if it’s a harem. Freya would definitely give him the bell treatment after seeing his unique soul but like bell I don’t think Jaune would love her. I think Alise would be a good choice especially since she looks like pyrrha which means you could pull reincarnation shenanigans saying she’s pyrrha after dying.

ch 0 2 Chapter 1: Anomaly in time

Danmachi: Knight and Justice

Anime & Comics · Paxkun

Xur_1603

1yr

Replied to Lord_Disaster

With the cover and it being Danmachi most likely a harem story

ch 0 1 Prologue

Danmachi: Knight and Justice

Anime & Comics · Paxkun

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

Pretty good setup so far I’m looking forward to how you develop the story further

ch 0 1 Prologue

Danmachi: Knight and Justice

Anime & Comics · Paxkun

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

+1

5. Reincarnated as Jaune Arc the title being "I'm Jaune Arc" with only the MC knowing the same as the first choice in the poll but having to be Jaune Arc as I'm writing this down because I was surprised what happened to Jaune in Vol 9 wanting me to try my take on it as someone did "I'm Ruby Rose" fanfic here with a different mindset.

RWBY: GAMER PATH

Anime & Comics · Jovami6729

Xur_1603

1yr

Posted

It’s pretty good so far even though the story pace is slightly slower then what I usually read. A system that encourages changing plot is great. I really hope you keep Ryo and Zero-two(I’m totally not biased I swear p.s. I know it’s harem) together throughout the whole story with no cheesy plot induced separation. The updating is a little irregular so I hope you can be more consistent but you probably got other priorities so it’s fine. I’m a little concerned about how you use the whole higher being looming threat in your story progression but I won’t judge for now cause the story isn’t that far in. Thank you for taking your time to write this novel I hope you keep updating it

Code: Infinity [Reboot]

Anime & Comics · SR_2027

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

Great read thank you for writing it

Thanks for tuning in to this, especially because the start was a bit rocky. This is the 1st time I've written after all. Anyways, ciao. And I will now focus on their adventures to other worlds so they can fuck shit up.

Honkai Impact: Invictus.

Video Games · Khay_Cee_Padua

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

Salem. Just imagine her reaction

ch 0 1 Coco Adel

I Have Too Many Spawns

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the upload The story’s good so far and the pacing is perfect for you speed of uploading. I’m curious what u plan to do with his harem though cause it’s already at 6 and the first wold isn’t over. Do you want to flush them out or make them Pokémon or both

ch 20 Yue’s new form

The Journey To The Top (Multiversal fanfic) [Completed]

Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

+1

2. Stay the same and continue it as is

The Journey To The Top (Multiversal fanfic) [Completed]

Anime & Comics · SentToOblivion

Xur_1603

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapters and welcome back.

ch 66 What Now?

Living with Truck-sama's Blessing on my Greedy path

Anime & Comics · QueenScathach

Xur_1603

2yr

Commented

Story’s good so far

ch 0 5 Douluo: Capture the Goddess Zhu Zhuqing at the Beginning Chapter 5: Star Tree Martial Spirit, innately full of spirit power exceeding 20

Douluo: Capture the Goddess Zhu Zhuqing at the Beginning

Others · surya12san

Xur_1603

2yr

Commented

Thanks for chapter. If you don’t feel motived to continue writing this then I suggest to stop writing it cause it wouldn’t be enjoyable for you and feel like a chore or job. Also I would incline you to stop writing multiple novels at the same time as it’s creatively draining and takes more effort to produce multiple chapters a week for your novels. P.S. I enjoyed reading this novel as he was already done with trying to reach the pinnacle as most novels are weak to strong which which gets boring as the plots are usually the cliche and predictable.