TruthHurtsX1000

It is written well. The grammar and paragraph structure is well done. Chapters are way too short and makes things stretch out way to much to get done. Main issue is Mc is instantly made out to be a naive idiot. Sells phone for 10million valid and buys equipment before even getting to main city for 9 million. His equipment worth luke 30k valis.. it's very cliche and honestly makes Mc boring and cliche afjust ruins him alot tbh

Danmachi: I'm the favourite of the Goddess

Anime & Comics · Meltlily

TruthHurtsX1000

6d

Commented

So Mc is naive idiot. Great.... a good choice of mc...not. lame af

ch 0 3 Hestia: Is He A Child From Outside?

Danmachi: I'm the favourite of the Goddess

Anime & Comics · Meltlily

TruthHurtsX1000

7d

Posted

8 chapters of worthless stretched out prologue then 3 of actual story. If Mc had to shyt it take 6 chapters for it to complete. Author just wanted to milk easy chapters for word word count and upload rank.

Harry Potter: Go To Hell

Book&Literature · LordSilvere

TruthHurtsX1000

7d

Replied to DZeref887

He is just lazy and wants easy mode upload

Building the Uzumaki Empire Starts by Summons the Gotei 13

Anime & Comics · DZeref887

TruthHurtsX1000

7d

Commented

One of the lamest and most forced chapters I've read in long time

ch 60 C60 Captain Marvel?

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

TruthHurtsX1000

9d

Posted

If you want a real life cyberpunk but with system then this might be for you but it has too many game elements sadly to be good. Gamer inventory and hud and all that shyt. Made Mc lame default male version look. The lack of originality harmed this alot

Cyberpunk 2077: A flawed Timeline

Video Games · SmutNovel01

TruthHurtsX1000

9d

Commented

Wish his look was more unique. Seems lazy af to just do default male V

ch 0 1 Waking Up!

Cyberpunk 2077: A flawed Timeline

Video Games · SmutNovel01

TruthHurtsX1000

11d

Replied to Eaturne

Doesn't seem that interesting then sadly. Even if a act he acting same as Canon so what's the point. Idk just seems bland that way

ch 17 Chapter 17: Sorting

The Slytherin Prince- Eaturne

Movies · Eaturne

TruthHurtsX1000

12d

Commented

So all these changes to mc and you still.copy and paste his interaction with Harry and Ron. What a let down.

ch 17 Chapter 17: Sorting

The Slytherin Prince- Eaturne

Movies · Eaturne

TruthHurtsX1000

12d

Commented

Oh well was ok while it lasted. Some just think a fanfic should make them loads of money. Maybe if original story all around but not a fanfic

ch 22 Update (5-3-24)

Bleach-The Sword God's Wives and Concubines

Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23

TruthHurtsX1000

13d

Commented

So same plot so far...waiting for actually something different..hope this isn't just copy and paste of same plot and scenarios

ch 14 The Overseer of Bucharest (1)

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

Anime & Comics · Pastlives

TruthHurtsX1000

14d

Commented

Why wouldn't he ask for a really strong pokemon

ch 0 2 Capítulo 2: Otro mundo

Apocalyptic Pokemon

Anime & Comics · Green0034

TruthHurtsX1000

16d

Posted

It's like author never read a fanfic before. So sister just random disappears the he sleeps and goes to Naruto verse. Sister stabbed in middle town by assassin right when he opens eyes. Yeah right. Village rain ain't bloody mist. Whole foundation is stupid and cliche. Now garbage chapter 3 just pushes it to not even worth trying. Plus no memories in 12 or so old body lmao dumbest shyt ever

Black Rinnegan In The Rain Village

Anime & Comics · PerSiMa

TruthHurtsX1000

16d

Commented

So very cliche start already. We will see

ch 0 1 01 - The Last Birthday

Black Rinnegan In The Rain Village

Anime & Comics · PerSiMa

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