tera_baap_aaya

1yr

Posted

it's excellent...... I love the setting of the story and i also liked that you didn't make the mc op in a single chapter and the romance is also quite good so that it won't hinder the pace of action later

Genghis khan's Acolyte- A Rising Havoc

History · Bumbleboi

tera_baap_aaya

2yr

Commented

it's good. you should give some spotlight to side characters

ch 0 3 CHAPTER 2-WILL I BE KILLED?

THE DARK PAST

Realistic · Bumbleboi

tera_baap_aaya

2yr

Posted

the storyline is quite good. the main character is someone who is not pretty dumb. he understands everything going around him and tries to solve it. so I don't know whether this novel will be popular or not but it will be good to not loose any motivation and keep going