Liasis - Profile

...Yeah it's just spam. Not sure why it was recommended as "encouraging". Literally just "hello" and "maybe hello" copy and pasted for two entire chapters.

I'm really enjoying this novel. It's pretty well-written and has a compelling, interesting story that keeps you wanting to read more. I'm very interested in the world development of the MC's original time and how his powers progress. And how his gaming abilities progress. Praise gamercat.

While I wouldn't call this novel bad, it's also far from the best and doesn't offer anything particularly new or interesting. That said, it's a fun read if you don't take it seriously and aren't looking for something to take seriously. I'd like to see it continued and the world expanded upon, though it also runs the risk of being even more repetitive than it already is and falling into the trap of just doing the same thing over and over again. It has potential to be great, but as is it's just okay.

The story has a very interesting hook and great world building. My only big criticism is that the grammar is very poor, and the spelling of names and terms can be inconsistent, making it hard to follow. It would benefit greatly from an editor, or even just machine grammar checking.