MG_Othinus - Profile

I have only read this story until Chapter 7 and oh god I already addicted to this story.

Godlike Novel, So far there is No System novel that can beat this

I have to say that the story is good and Enjoyable - Start off rather strong in my opinion. The characters are good, and the world building is slightly above average. Keep up a good work Author

I had fun when reading this - Nothing much outstanding about this novel but it is still fun for the reader. I really hope that the author will someday come back to this story

keep a good work 👍

Review after chapter 169 - Yes my fav number. Nothing much to say about this story but the early 20 chapters are kind of painful for me to read. Not bad but the inconsistency in early chapters is killing me. It still have some inconsistency but wasn't as bad as before Max is honestly pretty annoying but he is fine compared to most of the Harem Protagonist on this site. For the heroines they are good, so I have nothing to criticize about em. Update Stability, It is hella good, consistent and pretty hard for me to catch up. World Building is fine, although it will be more helpful if you goes into more detail about the world. For Grammar, I don't know about this cause English also isn't my first language so It is good enough for me to read and enjoy.

each of their own, I'm still enjoying this series and desperately wish that this story won't go on the same route as ship of lust which is by far the worst One Piece fanfic in this platform.