Webnovel Author: Meja_duduk - Novel Collection

Udah direvisi gan, karena mual sendiri baca yang lama[img=faceslap]

mantap gan, emang kadang suka kurang fokus ane soal typo dsc. Maklum, lagi berat banget walau kadang juga ngoreksi tiap hari.

aku ambil overall apa yang harus diperbaiki ya. Intinya terlalu banyak dialog, tapi karena ini lebih ke cerita santai bisa di toleran untuk hal tertentu. Perbanyak narasi yang bagus mengandung makna tertentu.

makasih mbak

yeah

thx man

yeah, i know. I will read your Novel for any references, thx

yeah, i already have my style about this. Dialogues is the main that I have for write more and more, for the narration is being hard than I imagined. I will work hard for this, thx

ok, i like this kind style who use many narration from first pov(protag). For some reason, this is will be my inspiration about narration for my novel which is had deficiency for each chapter.

2 or 3 chara, i using this style from light novel that i like it so much. Ok, imma revise any problem. thx

thx, imma goes

maksudku membuat cerita baru untuk series ini, intinya storyline