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som demons DEMONS they shouldn't care about the taboo, I mean that's why only humans care, don't you dare change their relationship with Ravel, what has been bothering them in these chapters is the situation and the attitude they have towards Sirzech and rias, I mean, it is assumed that part of the nature of the original riser remained in the body and influences the mc and that is why there is the situation with rias, therefore, that demonic nature should not also make him not have so many problems regarding having a relationship with your sister? The rest is good, the story is good, good work, author.

I just found the story and I'm loving it, I have to say that now I'm very intrigued by the relationship between fleur and harry, it's been a while since I found something to read about the Harry Potter fandom and I was thinking of going back to other stories but I found this and it didn't take me more than an hour and a half to reach it, I must say good job and I hope you don't stop the story.

ok the black keys are not that bad, i mean sieven against the fallen and demons. On the other hand, it's good that she learns to make sweets at some point, she's going to meet Ophis, so a little sweets and she could get along with her and then the rest of the beings would have to be careful how they treat the mc

I guess I shouldn't be surprised that he kills Issei, I mean the reward was pretty good if we don't take into account Draig's soul and the problems that being the red dragon emperor entails but honestly the class problem doesn't seem "logical" to me but In short, I only see 2 possible uses for the empowered team, I could make an exchange or with Azazel or the demons to solve the problem of the corpses or give it to one of his summons. the story so far is going pretty well keep it up author

Thanks for the cap, I see that you already use the mana as a sonar, which is quite good because in some works they forget about that utility, but I have a question by circulating the mana through your body, wouldn't you also get an increase in your strength? And if you focus it on a sense or organ like the eyes, wouldn't it increase its effectiveness? It's just a thought/suggestion in case the author wants to take it but I'm liking the story pretty well so far

I suppose that whoever was in the cave was destiny and from what she understood, together with the primordial of space, they are the ones who are controlling everything behind the scenes, but why it remains unknown, everything happened too fast. I hope that in the following chapters everything will be explained

ah ok, so I can't wait to read the reactions of the rest of the characters when they see grayfia

Thanks for the chapter, the story is pretty good so far and I hope to see how it progresses but if I remember, time in the world of dxd stops then grayfia and the mc appeared even in the middle of the civil war of the devils, so no Would it take some time until akeno appears? Or do you plan on time-jumping to canon?

I'm loving the story, good job author. 👍 Do you think it will take time for the mc to reveal the truth on Wednesday?

thanks for the cap and welcome, I hope to see how it progresses but I have a question related to the other stories, will you update them again or will you just continue with this one?

It's a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter, although the mistakes Harry made are annoying because he is supposed to be a war veteran and the older Harry's personality is the dominant one, I can see them as logical and accept them with resignation, (also keep in mind that it's not the same world and Harry doesn't seem to fully accept this (at least in terms of power, as you can see by the arrogance he carries) another point is dark magic doesn't reach him to use "a lot" which I see as a mistake, and the fight scenes are too long although it doesn't bother me much after a while if it gets a bit boring but the story is very good 10/10 keep it up 👍

I want revenge, in the future it will be poetic to see how he ends up with Heracles and gives Hera a lesson but very good chap

both since Ajuka created the diablo.net which is like a google and is where they see the games between the nobles, but mostly they communicate with communication circles since it seems easier to them

me encanto este capitulo

tambien me gustaria ver adentro del harem a tsnade y konan

me encantaria ver la cara que ponen los soldados cuando vean al "rango f " jajajaj gracias por el cap

entonces podias hacer que en la tienda del sistema compre una linea de sangre le daria un impulso de poder y el fisico que necesita

maldicion esta muy buena la historia gran capitulo

me encanta el personaje de shio ojala la pueda reclutar es como una hermana pequeña

gracias por el capitulo