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Jin could clearly remember the first time they slept together... wait.

Living as a Lord in another World is unsurprisingly easy!

Living as a Lord in another World is unsurprisingly easy!

Anime & Comics · Cythiano

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Tightly closing her mouth shut with his thumb and middle finger, Jin wielded the crimson blade using his free arm with ease, as if it was just an extension of his body.

Living as a Lord in another World is unsurprisingly easy!

Living as a Lord in another World is unsurprisingly easy!

Anime & Comics · Cythiano

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Fr?

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Taking a deep breath, Jin could hardly contain the immense turbulence happening within at the moment.

Living as a Lord in another World is unsurprisingly easy!

Living as a Lord in another World is unsurprisingly easy!

Anime & Comics · Cythiano

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Safe to say, this is a breath of fresh air compared to most stories here at Webnovel. In fact, I don’t believe I’ve ever seen a quality story in recent times that has its main character be a genuinely good person without ulterior motives/mental issues. He doesn’t do the “I don’t kill” rule nor spares scumbags because he doesn’t want to stoop to their low. No, he’s a GOOD guy, not a HARMLESS guy. First of all, the writing quality is holding up really well. It strikes a good balance between details, plot progression, and making sure to cut down on walls and walls of text without sacrificing grammar and flow. If there was anything to critique, it’s that there’s yet to be a coherent plot-line. Of course, this story is just at its infancy, and a bit of background on what Homelander has been up to is warranted. Next is both the stability of updates and world background. Now, I won’t say much about it. The first five chapters were published within around an hour between each chapter, with its contents focusing on Homelander’s deeds. The changes he’s caused have already started popping up, but as it stands with only five chapters, I can’t be so biased. Hopefully, updates remain frequent once the schedule has been stabilized as well. So far, the story has been developing at a brisk pace, but it doesn’t feel like you’re being left behind in the dust. There’s enough context there to let you enjoy the book, even if you aren’t familiar with The Boys. It’s incredibly satisfying to watch how much the main character does and see the stark difference of how he treats the world compared to his original counterpart. The actual plot hasn’t even begun, but current events have more than enough substance to fill that gap. Lastly, character design. What can be said? It’s shaping to be pretty good based on what’s shown. Characters are realistic, even while discounting the fact that they’re from The Boys. None of them, at least the main and supporting cast, are one-dimensional cut outs that only fulfill cliche roles in the story. Now, Homelander, while he’s absolutely carrying these chapters, acts more as a source of change that impacts the plot. It would be a delight to see his inner conflicts and watch him grow despite the corruption of hero society, but even if that took secondary focus, he’s such a good dude that it’s hard to be disappointed. The only thing left to say for the author is to be careful not to get burnt out. Take things at a steady pace, and know what you want for the story. I’d rather have one chapter per week with exciting writing and plot than 3 chapters a day with idle talk/repeating content. I’m excited to see things unfold, so keep up the good work.

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"Mature", really?

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"You are weird," said Nam-ra with a smile, as she felt he was different from others because he was almost the same age as them but more mature than them.

My Journey in other worlds starting from the world All of us are dead.

My Journey in other worlds starting from the world All of us are dead.

Movies · Jagadish_A_8390

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Accidental Rizz?

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She wanted to back away and beat him up but his grip on her lips was too enticing. Satsuki unconsciously kissed back.

Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage

Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage

Anime & Comics · some_writer

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P h o t o.

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The object Valentina had gifted me was a photograph. A Wizarding photograph, to be more precise. A Wizarding photograph with herself as the subject. The Valentina in the photo winked at me from between her own legs, leaning down to hug her ankles and demonstrate how flexible she was. I couldn't help but gulp as I took in the lewd scene. Oh my…

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

Book&Literature · Daddy

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Homegirl setting up a Meta Team Comp

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Septima nodded, "Yes, and a Veela is a good start but we can do better. I have at least three equations for the optimal coven set-up and I won't have them going to waste. Look here-…"

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]

Book&Literature · Daddy

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The rizz is insanity

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"Found you, Rena." Fuutarou whispered to the extremely flustered Yotsuba who started stuttering incoherently.

Quintessential Quintuplets: Live Life To The Fullest

Quintessential Quintuplets: Live Life To The Fullest

Anime & Comics · some_writer

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Oh buddy boy will this be quite the surprise for you

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When you max out this skill, you will gain a new max level skill called 'Heavenly Restriction'.]

Quintessential Quintuplets: Live Life To The Fullest

Quintessential Quintuplets: Live Life To The Fullest

Anime & Comics · some_writer

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WHAT!? MONSTER HUNTER?! More importantly, you need to rest every now and again so you don’t burn out. Take care of your health, for the sake of yourself and your stories.

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<i>If you guys got any questions, I will answer them! I might take a break tomorrow, I've been writing non-stop for the past two months, and I think the fatigue is catching up. I've started a Monster Hunter story…, so yeah, I'm pushing myself too much lmao.</i>

Fate/Demi-Servant

Fate/Demi-Servant

Anime & Comics · SaurianMp4

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You’re welcome! Whichever one you decide on, I’m going to keep reading and see where this story can lead to. Somehow, it’s difficult to find SOLID FGO works despite the game’s popularity, so it’s pretty hype to see this book show up while I was scrolling. (Btw, any chance Mash and/or Gudako can squeeze into the harem? Just asking. 👉👈)

<i>I have a question, would keeping Olga alive mess up things? I've seen a lot of fanfics keep her alive, and in one case, Gilgamesh uses a Holy Grail to revive her, but they have yet to get far for me to see anything bad with this, outside of her presence being recurrent, but I want to know if it would cause a butterfly effect, etc. </i>

Fate/Demi-Servant

Fate/Demi-Servant

Anime & Comics · SaurianMp4

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Olga isn’t all too necessary to keep, as her death practically serves as the catalyst for Gudako to really begin the journey to restore Humanity. Without Olga, another magus, Fujimaru really becomes the last Master, without exception. Through this, Romani Archaman is also forced to take charge of Chaldea, giving him importance toward the story, making the future climax of FGO’s first half (The Singularities Arc) have that much more impact. Of course, if you’re inclined to keep her and make her relevant even in the future, that’s perfectly fine too. Based on a paragraph from the Type Moon Wiki, “The preservation of Human Order itself is something that she only seeks out of a sense of obligation to her father, who she idolizes. Privately, she does not even know for certain what it means to "preserve Human Order" and merely wishes to show the world that she is able to fulfill her responsibilities as director; even then she does not think it would bring her any pleasure and is uncertain if she could ever find happiness.”, this insight into her inner thoughts can be used for further character development, having her bloom into an independent person with her own wants and doesn’t act merely through lingering duties toward her father or Chaldea. Something like that. P.S. SPOILERS AHEAD Olga makes a resurgence in the second-half of FGO (Cosmos in The Lostbelt). The character does not actually revive or anything, but, similar to getting another saber-face, a new character is introduced with her appearance. It’s a completely different person that just has her body as a vessel. Whether the REAL Olga is alive or not remains unknown, but if you want more details on this look-a-like, search “U-Olga Marie” on the Wiki.

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<i>I have a question, would keeping Olga alive mess up things? I've seen a lot of fanfics keep her alive, and in one case, Gilgamesh uses a Holy Grail to revive her, but they have yet to get far for me to see anything bad with this, outside of her presence being recurrent, but I want to know if it would cause a butterfly effect, etc. </i>

Fate/Demi-Servant

Fate/Demi-Servant

Anime & Comics · SaurianMp4

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