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I kinda hope this Gaeren doesn't die.. he seems a likeable character but knowing the current mood of the MC mercy and holding back are not on his list of things he is willing to do.

Little shapeshifting trickster picked a fight with the wrong demon god, Demon lord should really apply when he is collecting seeds and crowns.

when someone explain what they were actually doing the summer court is going to regret this mistake even further

hmm.. I'm thinking empower the spider to track and capture the troublemaker, Since she was able to track him down repeatedly it seems like a task she would be suited for.

oh fun, we have a saboteur, also just realized tonight that the duke may have lucked out on a reprieve. his suffering is to last as long as the MC's, mc could live for decades or centuries, but now that there is a path to bringing Beth back the Duke may get an early release/death :)

I knew spider girl was going to be around for a while.

There are many things that could go wrong, claiming the power to go will be a challenge on its own, but once he gets there will she want to come back with him, it it takes years then she will have readjusted to life on earth. Him bringing that much magic to earth all at once could also cause unforeseen side effects. Additionally, once he gets back chances are he will have powerful enemies and he will be in a weakened state. this is going to be interesting.

well.. he knows almost exactly where to go to claim the human crown.. and the other fairy crown.. no clue where any of the other seeds are though.. somehow I see him eventually claiming every crown and seed though it does beg the question of what happens to the crowns/seeds when he makes his round trip.. will they be reformed and him having to reclaim them or does he get those back when he returns...

Crown Bearer, Twilight King, Demon Lord. going to enjoy reading about every community completely freak out about this new over powered existence. I may be wrong but it seems to me that he is stronger now then the demon lord he took the title from.

Given that he can still summon in his armor I feel like Beth is still alive or in some way connected to him. Demon Lords tend to have powers beyond normal, and its a fantasy world, res magic may be a thing here

typically I have a habit of skipping through fight scenes. trouncing scenes like this one though always make me smile.

Well you certainly know how to write an irritating antagonist. I personally hope the duke's kid is made invalid and he finds himself penniless and outcast from society.

well atleast he's learning, needs to figure out his magic as well, he's not the pure fighter he used to be. I feel like if nee was more emotional she might be yelling something along the lines of you've got a mana pool, use it!

I am looking forward to seeing what this Duke does when he tries whatever it is he is going to try. I do suspect his son has some severe mental deficiency thinking he still stands a chance against the MC though.

I would also suggest Eve if dusk is a no go, and if sunset is supposed to be the female of the pair. Short for Evening and works well as a name. Either way its your story just my naming sensibilities don't like sunset as a name though you and I do have similar naming sense, The story I am writing the main character is named Crimson and his father is Silver

He probably should have just sent the guy flying out of the ring instead of himself... also wouldn't Silver Dusk be better then Silver Sunset?