It makes no sense for him to reveal unexpected information every second like a parrot. I hope he doesn't go around exposing information in every corner and keeps it to himself. He's drooling 馃い Luffy's eggs, every chapter, this is boring. Make him a more composed MC like Zoro. He doesn't look like someone who can hold the position of vice-captain. It would be nice if he had a personality similar to Benn Beckman.
ch 0 7 Creating a fake background
Anime & Comics 路 Evil_Paragon
I thought the idea of a weak-strong MC was cool, but I hope he doesn't lean on Zoro every chapter, he can't even walk alone without being carried. I also hope he is more resourceful/smart. He hasn't shown himself to be very smart so far, for example he had a firearm but didn't use it. He could devise plans to deal with his enemies, using his head. He could also have more composure and act like a vice-captain, so far he hasn't shown himself to be smarter than Luffy, even being stabbed when he had a gun on him.
ch 0 6 Devil Fruits and Haki
Anime & Comics 路 Evil_Paragon
Does the author plan to put content +18? It would be a good way for the MC to bring the leader of brilliant mothers to his side. He could help her fulfill her repressed desires 馃槇. It would be another step towards gaining more influence in the church. Bringing bright moms to your side. After all, God's Favorite must pour, his sacred power, on brilliant mothers 馃槆馃檹馃檹馃檹馃檹
ch 30 30. Questionable Questions
Fantasy 路 MisterImmortal
thanks for the chapter 馃槈馃槈
ch 18 Chapter 17 - Tiona.
Anime & Comics 路 ParodyGirl
What bothers me is that several chapters have passed, and the MC still hasn't come close to any of the protagonists of the story. Hestia treats the MC like he's a stranger, only occasionally worrying about him. The protagonists don't even remember the name of the MC they met 2 days ago? The mc is mediocre... and seems to have low self-esteem. He only relates to the ocs created by the author, but is not present in the main plot of the series. Not to mention he needs to beg Tiona Hiryute to remember his name next time. What kind of MC beta attitude is this? It's just an opinion. but, I would like to see the mc interacting more with the main plot, he seems aimless to me... living without purpose.
ch 18 Chapter 17 - Tiona.
Anime & Comics 路 ParodyGirl
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ch 35 I Want to Try Putting It in My Mouth...
Eastern 路 MyLittleBrother
ch 0 7 Creating a fake background
Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates
Anime & Comics 路 Evil_Paragon