Webnovel Author: Radpiplup - Fanfic Collection

is thre romance?

very good chapters thank you

either way i wanna see how this turns out also wanna know if he has the smae feelings as the orignal guy

if hes jus indiffrent its boring its nice to see charachters having emotions

good chapter

OHH THAT MKES SENSE. i think adding this expalnation in the intorduciton of the stats makes alot of sense you can do it like "Author Note:" i think its gonna help people

does the stat scale with the grade? like B+ in strength at grade 8 is way wrose then B+ in strength in Grade 2?

isnt grade two really good since grade 1 is the "peak" besides grade 0?

I think jus explaining his strenghts or having like a system stats bar show in the chapter before the fight or when he awkaned would've been better. more information of what his families power is would seem to me like a good choice but you did a good job on the chapter!

to be completly honest the fight scene was mediocre, and not telling us about his powers before hand really ruined the fight. If you went ahead and explained his powers and even mentioned htem in the fight before it happened this would've been way better. You also mentioned the grace family ability without saying what it is. You should include what that is next time you make a similiar chapter.