It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.
Fantasy · BrewingFantasies
Fantasy · LeftPinky
this is interesting
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Fantasy · BlackFlamer
isekai'd?
woman waifu?
Really good chapter one, haven't seen any mistake. Good grammar and unique permise
Trying a totally new topic. We will see how it works out.
Teen · Interiorcrocodile
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Too many typos, I like the mc so far nothing really to hate but nothing really to love. I want to see, more world background and is paragon city the mail city on the country why? How many cities?
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It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.
Incubus' Blood Harem
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