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You are right 🙌. I have done a good number of clean up today using pc. Thanks for your suggestions. It' always feels great to get a feedback.

" Let me call Casime, " Ela said reaching into her bag to bring out her phone. When I looked around the party venue, the few people around were all strange to me. I had expected to see a lot of familiar faces since the surposed celebrant was Casime lover who used to be our class mate at the University. Casime and I were never friends and will not consider us as enemies either. We have had a little misunderstanding over a guy in our school days but we managed to move past it. At least so I thought. We never got along much after the fight between us although we gave each other a good front to say hi when ever we saw after then. Casime was one of those busy bodies who always thinks she could outshine any one. She also was known for her multiple relationships. One thing I liked about her was how she could light up a place with her funny stories. She was mostly very happy and we saw her as news carrier. If anything was happening in school, Casime would be the first to know. She usually gave us the latest gist on campus. "I hope we would get along better now that we are no longer in schoo"I swallowed under my breath. It's been three years after graduation and I have not set my eyes on her after our graduation ceremony. If it was not for the expection of seeing my class mate, I wouldn't have gone for the party but now that everything seems weird, I wondered if I have not made a wrong decision. 'Well I needed to take a break from my hunting thought'I tried to console my self. I went over to meet Ela who had been on the phone.

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

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Thanks for the tip mate

My eyes followed him as the bus moved, but he got smaller until I could no longer see him. I felt a thump' in my heart when I could no longer see him.

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

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Thanks for the tip mate

My eyes followed him as the bus moved, but he got smaller until I could no longer see him. I felt a thump' in my heart when I could no longer see him.

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

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They introduced themselves during the chat 😃

"Karl, is that really you?" I muttered looking him in the eyes. "Yes it's me I have long wished for this day my love," he replied back also looking straight into my eyes as if he was trying to get hold of something in there. His words were heart melting to me. I felt my heart missed a beat.

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

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I guess you are reading with pc because everything is fine with phone . I write with my phone directly in the app I will adjust now Thanks for your suggestion I will put it to use 👍

" Let me call Casime, " Ela said reaching into her bag to bring out her phone. When I looked around the party venue, the few people around were all strange to me. I had expected to see a lot of familiar faces since the surposed celebrant was Casime lover who used to be our class mate at the University. Casime and I were never friends and will not consider us as enemies either. We have had a little misunderstanding over a guy in our school days but we managed to move past it. At least so I thought. We never got along much after the fight between us although we gave each other a good front to say hi when ever we saw after then. Casime was one of those busy bodies who always thinks she could outshine any one. She also was known for her multiple relationships. One thing I liked about her was how she could light up a place with her funny stories. She was mostly very happy and we saw her as news carrier. If anything was happening in school, Casime would be the first to know. She usually gave us the latest gist on campus. "I hope we would get along better now that we are no longer in schoo"I swallowed under my breath. It's been three years after graduation and I have not set my eyes on her after our graduation ceremony. If it was not for the expection of seeing my class mate, I wouldn't have gone for the party but now that everything seems weird, I wondered if I have not made a wrong decision. 'Well I needed to take a break from my hunting thought'I tried to console my self. I went over to meet Ela who had been on the phone.

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

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I love the narrative techniques of the story and how each characters are being introduced. Intriguing story line and the plot is great as well. Keep it up author

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Hmmm, I can smell some dangers for Deyan...

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It would be an adventure Iris won't further in a hurry. Let me read some more. I 'm eager to know what happened next.

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I love the first person point of view narration you use in this chapter,it makes connecting with the character easy... What Grace wanted was simple put the parents thought the have given her all. Yes they did her their best but never cared to know what she wanted...

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Interesting story I must say. How sad can she gets. It's even worse for Grace because she was like the envious of every other kid because she has what people think are most important' famous and rich parents,,, but the sad reality of her life was she wasn't happy...

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