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wow! I found the concept of the magical beasts very intriguing! very well written!馃憦馃憦
ch 0 4 Rohanic Tribes
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I felt so sorry for Ryne馃ズ, Daney is one little brat!
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Grey
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I love how you described loneliness here!
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I think the hyphen here could have been taken out and the sentences could be made to flow more naturally!
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I think this "name carving" is some sort of foreshadowing :) I may be wrong, but let's see!
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I love how these surprises were structured!
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oooh! I am curious about this letter now! an interesting element.
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the word "signified" here could be replaced with a better word, makes it sound textbookish rather than emotional!
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yet again, the worldbuilding is impeccable! I loved Cecilia's description and this tiny encounter Ryne had with her! adorable!
ch 0 5 Her
Timeless Celestial's Odyssey
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