I really enjoyed reading this chapter, especially these lines[img=update]
I gasped at his actions as my body froze while he held onto my shoulders tightly. His body structure remained firm as he was silent as a lamb. He was quite different from the rest of the guys I knew. He spoke less as if he wished to keep his life hidden. He was a sealed mystery book waiting to be opened and explored. His strange eyes stared into my enthralling ones. The cold winds blew against our faces as we stood close together. It will only take one swift move from him for our lips to sealed a passionate kiss. I could not read his body language before but now I know he desired me. It appears that he dwells in the forest at times and knowing that he may have a wild side made me more aroused. Have you ever met someone for the first time and felt so mesmerized by their presence?
Eastern · Christie_M
I really enjoyed reading. Great work and suspense. This is actually a fantastic plot. The scenes were described in such a way that it felt real. Again fantastic work and writing skills. Looking forward to more from you. I have never read anything like this before. New and innovative. Thanks for sharing.
The Unknown
Eastern · Christie_M