TheMasterNovice - Profile

Writing Quality 4/5: There are minor grammar mistakes, but they are very miniscule.Story Development 4/5: Personally, until we reach the Draconic Ruins Realm, then I doubt that the path would diverge too much from TDG's plot.Character Design 4/5: Fairly intelligent. Too slow of a cultivation though. I also wished he was more cunning.Updating Stability 4/5: This is based on how your updates back then.World Background 4/5: I normally score TDG fanfics with 3/5-stars since they don't really delve into world-building. However, you added your own flare into this and it's decent.

Writing Quality 4/5: It's decent. Stability of Updates 4/5: For when he was still active. Story Development 3/5: It's alright. Character Design 3/5: The MC is just alright. World Background: I don't why you have Japanese names in a universe where the universal language is Chinese. English names are fine as well since they appeared in the story, but Japanese names? Hell nah. You should've just stuck with the Chinese language.

Writing Quality 4/5: There are a lot of text blocks. I hope separate the character dialogues and the extra information texts from each other. Stability of Updates 3/5: It's not as frequent, but the quality makes up for it. Story Development 5/5: Good so far. Character Design 4/5: Not so sure about the green hair, he's a decent MC overall. World Background 5/5: Soul Land's world background is well-fleshed out, especially since it has so many stories in it.

it's alright -

Writing Quality 3/5: Constant grammatical errors. Stability of Updates 5/5: For when you were updating it. Story Development 3/5: He had a lot of chances to change things but didn't. Killing off the main perpetrators of the Sacred Family won't change much of anything, so I don't know why you even bother waiting for Nie Li. Character Design 3/5: He appears to have a clear goal in mind, but his decisions and ways of doing thing is rather strange. He's also not that interesting of a character. World Background 3/5: This is clearly an AU since the Dream Cloud World was sealed around the time of the Age of Darkness (more than a thousand years but not several or a few thousand like you've described). Not saying it's a bad idea, but it's not that interesting either.