Himanshu_Sehrawat_4655

2mth

Commented

did he r**e wife of kozuki oden and called it just shamelessness

ch 98 New Realm of Shamelessness!

One Piece : Kill Roger At the Beginning

Anime & Comics · Daddy_strikes_

Himanshu_Sehrawat_4655

5mth

Commented

it's an amzazing story and I don't know where you are going with it but usually author try not to change things but with the timeline you have chosen its inevitable so rather than trying to keep a caricature of it go in your direction and make it your own story with just concepts taken from Naruto

ch 26 Chapter 26: Police Force Proposal

I Am Uchiha With A Son System

Anime & Comics · ZoroTraineeWriter

Himanshu_Sehrawat_4655

1yr

Commented

Good beginning just don't make him OP and more focused on actual politics that happens in HOTD. If you're going through the valeriyan steel route try not to rely on magic for every solution .Other really good story you can also read a story about garmon Targaryen as it was based on greens

Ah....guys would you please give a review to my FF. And share some of your input as well. it would motivate me to write.

House of the dragon (THE GREEN TERROR)))

TV · antagonist123

Himanshu_Sehrawat_4655

1yr

Posted

one of best world building stories ever , the main character may not be as emotionally connected to others and rather than dense its portrayal is borderline dumb but other than that fantastic .Don't make Cleo and Julian pairing NTR is not gonna be tasteful and may ruin the story

Earth's Greatest Magus

Fantasy · Avan

Himanshu_Sehrawat_4655

2yr

Replied to Preston_Playz_8167

They parted on happy terms .she was like master Yoda to him her work was done .

Complicated Sex Life Of Ben

Celebrities · Fireces

Himanshu_Sehrawat_4655

2yr

Commented

Second vault has seven sins in them 😂 nice plot let's see where you go with this. Great read a lil slow on uptake but all around good word building. I like it it's not just si came and conquered everything types.

ch 56 Quinn vs Tracy, Parseltongue, and Gossip