It should say Leonard stormed not Tyler
After they left, Tyler stormed towards Jordan angrily and hollered, "Mr. Steele, I don't know how Tyler has offended you to suffer such treatment from you! You made my son lose 75 million dollars but I'm afraid you must have lost more than that!"
Urban · I Have Something To Say
It should read Mr. Collins since it is Jordan who is speaking. So he is not referring to himself
Jordan extended his hand to gesture for Victoria to calm down. He remained composed and said, "Mr. Steele, I'm more than eager to be taught a lesson by you. May I know who the triad boss you're referring to is?"
Urban · I Have Something To Say
About freaking time! Drug on long enough 🙄
ch 65 Everyone Looks Forward To Mr. Steele's Appearance!
Urban · I Have Something To Say
Ok the non believing has gone on long enough. It has gotten boring. It's cliché and when they "find" out they'll be like Drew and stunned and grovel but enough. Just have his true identity revealed and let them suffer
ch 50 Meeting By Chance At The Restaurant!
Urban · I Have Something To Say
Gee... what a shock! (Note heavy sarcasm) And now that she's alone and weak, she'll get taken and Michael won't know but some how will save her, blah blah blah. How unoriginal and cliché. This story had promise early on, now it's just pathetic and obvious
ch 70 An Unexpected Visitor
Fantasy · Zhao Chaochao
Oh good, another two chapters filled with Cecily loving her abuser. Can't wait until she returns as she says for her punishment then whines about it. But she's doing this to show he can't stifle her? And force her? Right...
ch 67 The Dream
Fantasy · Zhao Chaochao
Good grief. If she's so dang hung up on her abuser and loves him so and misses him this badly then just freaking go back! Quit harping on what is he doing, where is he, if he found her today, etc. for a million chapters!
ch 63 A Sumptuous Breakfast
Fantasy · Zhao Chaochao
How revolting! She "misses" the mate who mistreats her. Threatens her and her family. Locks her in a room, demands obedience and she follow HIS rules. Continually angry at her, tries to blackmail her to answer any of her questions. Really, we're supposed to feel good about reading this? I feel sick. I am finding nothing redeeming about Michael so far and about to say not worth it
ch 56 Mate Connection
Fantasy · Zhao Chaochao
Claims to not be a coward anymore yet can't stand up to her "mate" even if he's being cruel? Can't stand up to other students who call her names and talk about her, just 'frown' at them? Please, she doesn't know the meaning of not being a coward.
ch 50 The Crazy Alison
Fantasy · Zhao Chaochao
Ok, seriously enough blaming everything on her wolf! If her wolf is that weak then she should get rid of Mia. She's mostly an idiot human anyway, just complete it. Geez. Sick of her flip flopping about her dang feelings and then immediately begin like " Mia can't take it... Mia can't handle the marking. Mia can't handle the pain." No, Cecily can't. But she won't grow up and admit it
ch 44 A Fatal Attraction
Fantasy · Zhao Chaochao
I get that he's scary, that her former mate was a selfish bast*rd but enough. They are mates. Her "wolf" doesn't need more time, Cecily does but is too immature to say it. The girl needs to grow a spine, grow up and quit being terrified of every dang thing! And quit wanting to run home to mommy and daddy and be sheltered some more, since that's what got her into this mess to begin with [img=faceslap]
ch 34 Almost Marked
Fantasy · Zhao Chaochao
I was not being rude to anyone at anytime, I simply questioned politely a juxtaposition that was in a story. Which I am no longer reading. And you can express your opinion about my words, but no you don't have a right to judge my words or opinions. But wish you all the best, bye!
ch 21 Artem - Dinner
Fantasy · Deni_Chance
I'm not being hateful. I'm simply expressing MY opinion which I have every right to do. And if you have a problem with that it's on you. You do not know me, don't judge or make assumptions about me based on a few words about an online story. You spoke your piece prior, no need to repeat yourself. Bless your heart
ch 21 Artem - Dinner
Fantasy · Deni_Chance
Ew. How gross are all these people! Ex-wife is a gold digging, unintelligent who*e. And now this woman willing to spread her legs because her son was a spoiled brat and she refuses to let him get punished! This story has gone from could be promising to gross and ridiculous
ch 84 Rosie Begs For Mercy
The Abandoned Husband Dominates
Urban · I Have Something To Say