the writing style is quite good, but there is still a lot of grammar mistake. storyline also good but quite rush. but i really like the character desain because i think its unique in my opinion among DD fanfic. keep up and keep update.
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the writing style is quite good, but there is still a lot of grammar mistake. storyline also good but quite rush. but i really like the character desain because i think its unique in my opinion among DD fanfic. keep up and keep update.
legend of white eye douluo
Anime & Comics · Miliyant