I think that's it's a great book and the fact that Midoriya didn't get a quirk from AFO is nice because of all the other fanfics he will just get a powerful quirk from him and dominate everyone and they can't continue the story later. But I think your story has potential and it's nice up till now. So keep up the good work.
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I think that it a pretty interesting story, but few minor mistakes. I honestly think that the story is going in a good way, and I hope you didn't drop it
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I think that's it's a great book and the fact that Midoriya didn't get a quirk from AFO is nice because of all the other fanfics he will just get a powerful quirk from him and dominate everyone and they can't continue the story later. But I think your story has potential and it's nice up till now. So keep up the good work.
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