agree with you, he should not have random abilitys from other worlds too but maybe learn some from this world would be better.
A/N: the mc doesn't just have Excalibur and the dragon factor, he has other powers and skills from other random anime I've watched, which I'll slowly reveal on various different chapters.
Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
Is this your original fanfic or translated?
Reupload?
ch 0 1 Chapter One: Nuances
Anime & Comics · Triple_Sweet
He can go super saiyajin and shoot a kamehameha out of his mouth xD
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Anime & Comics · GodaSensei
Maybe perfection of form combined with strength and the ability to peform it in any situation?
I unlocked one of Yamamoto's signature punches; Ikkotsu.
Anime & Comics · Palpable_Banana
Well with what I read so far I can say that this is a good idea with potential but sadly the Author can´t get to touch upon it. The writing Quality is not good with a lot of mistakes. Some plot points are weird like the age of the protagonist and so on. Furthermore I think the part that he has a System with the potential to unlock his power just by leveling it is never rly that apealing because you can just bulls*it it and decide how strong he is at whatever point. I also don´t like his name and how he gets to know the charakters of the JJK World, it feels lackluster and more like "Well I wantet you guys to know that they exist". I was realy looking forward to reading this but the quality of this story just feels like a Chinese webnovel and with this I sadly will not continue. I still wish the Author the best of luck for the future.
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depends if Yamamoto is the old mann or not. If yes then no.
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it would be nice if you stopped starting every sentence with Aizen try more sentence building
ch 0 2 The Fire Temple
Anime & Comics · moonmirror
I would say dont let her switch the deck but just upgrade it konstantly.
Before we begin, I'm wondering how do you guys feel seeing Divine Dragon Lord Felgrand as Yuna's trump card, like Yugi with dark magician and Kaiba with BEWD? I will implement other decks in this story but Divine Dragon Lord Felgrand will be her main.
Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy
Kinda dumb that someone who is sacrificing himself for his clan would tell that to a child to plant hatred. I read something similar in another FF and also tought that it is stupid to go to a 4 year old child and say "I trust you that you will protect my child that is btw older than you" and "I feel this blind child will be someone strong with gut feeling alone". It´s not like there are fairytails in Naruto where that happend so were does he get this trust in him? It feels like a stupid way to motivate him.
ch 0 9 Ch-9 The Unexpected Visitor
Anime & Comics · Hkj
Well at least it will only take 18 years to get 100%, so good trade off! :D
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Anime & Comics · Hkj
How about a weapon created from a divne beast with the concept of death. That would make the weapon able to kill gods because the concept of death is stronger than the divinity of gods which would be able to kill the soul of a god. So he would be able to kill gods witout being someone who can destroy the soul of a god himself. And because he killed the divine beast you could make the MC a half-god and give him some ability that enhances him in eather the body so he gets a strong body (like Hercules) or his magic becomes refined with a touch of divinity. This will depend on the route you want to go with the MC if more magic oriented or phisical. As a weapon he could wieald a Great-sword or something smaler like a Rapier up to you.
Requirements: Number of concepts - 1 (concepts like: unrecognizable, instant death, etc. are immediately rejected).
Anime & Comics · Ased
SO far the story feels like a journal and not rly what i search for. The idea is also good but to be honest this feels not like Zeref reincarnated but more like someone who admired him and took his toughts.
ch 0 3 The Trials of Courage
Anime & Comics · realdu_31302
Ravenclaw.
After the welcoming formalities, the students were assigned to one of the four Hogwarts houses: Gryffindor, Slytherin, Hufflepuff or Slytherin. Zachary held his breath as his name was called.
Anime & Comics · realdu_31302
I Love how he dosen‘t care and Upload the next one ^^
ch 32 Chapter 32: Malcolm
DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
Anime & Comics · vilan864