Danzeman00

2mth

Commented

Wrong book?

ch 893 Done Before It Began

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

Games · Galanar

Danzeman00

4mth

Replied to Danzeman00

I can’ t wait for tomorrow lol

Grace didn't seem flustered, though. She stared at the incoming flaming fist. When the nine suns crashed into each other as they were heading toward her, she put her hand in their path. Long's flaming fist crashed into her opened palm. While Long's fist was flaring with intense fire, her palm was swirling with cold dark mist.

Second World

Games · UnrivaledArcaner

Danzeman00

4mth

Commented

You suck for this cliff hanger I actually became upset when I realized this was the second daily chapter

Grace didn't seem flustered, though. She stared at the incoming flaming fist. When the nine suns crashed into each other as they were heading toward her, she put her hand in their path. Long's flaming fist crashed into her opened palm. While Long's fist was flaring with intense fire, her palm was swirling with cold dark mist.

Second World

Games · UnrivaledArcaner

Danzeman00

9mth

Commented

(Image?)

Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

Games · Follower_of_Abadom

Danzeman00

2yr

Posted

I really like the premise of the story, it has a solid base but the execution of the story itself is very spotty. The grammar is simply atrocious In spots. Furthermore there seem to be quite a few fake reviews on the page as well which runs me the wrong way. Overall I’m probably dropping the story 40ish chapters in because the grammar is slowly killing my will and it’s Becoming more and more far fetched.