I couldn't help but notice The language addiction in the chapters, the author repeats these words several times unnecessarily, making reading tedious, and in 99% of cases it is unnecessary. Here are the words that are repeated a lot in the chapters DETERMINATION, DETERMINED, UNSHAKEABLE and HARRY.
ch 11 11. To Harlem
Movies · Story_Teller_229
This is simply the best twilight fic, in fact I believe it has the potential to be so much more.
ch 57 werewolves or demons?
Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
The author has made MC do impossible things before and I wouldn't even be surprised if he did it again. It is impossible to mix with sage mode, because the chakra becomes erratic and it is even impossible to cast jutsu when it opens the gates. At least that's what the manga says.
ch 431 Chapter 427 : A Couple of Minutes
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
I understood. But I just couldn't help it, these things really irritate me. Many things in this work are ridiculous but tolerable.
ch 416 Chapter 412 : RIP Privacy
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
real? and simply insulting, the author treats all the characters as if they were stupid, wanting to compare the intelligence of someone who lived in a peaceful world and then about 15, 16 years in naruto, with someone who is the leader of a military village who spent more 30 years in wars and political wars is simply an insult. and I'm not even talking about the ridiculous and impossible use of shadow clones. All that nonsense aside, the work is good.
ch 416 Chapter 412 : RIP Privacy
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
It would be more appropriate if you put a timeSkip. Using shadow clones like this is extremely dangerous, not only because it drains chakra, but mainly because of the "cerebral" mental pressure, Naruto could train like this because Kurama was constantly healing him. probably only the Jinchuriki and Hashirama could train like this with the clones, any other shinobi would die.
ch 362 Chapter 359 : Vacuum Blade, Vacuum Slash, Hurricane Sword!
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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ch 0 7 Chapter 6: Holy Kingdom Elia (1)
Anime & Comics · Infernal_Infinite
I understand, but from the moment it was reborn, it stopped being a fictional world and its reality now. no matter how strong, smart and cunning a person is, they will never achieve anything alone, and you need to have people you can trust and call a friend, but clearly the MC is a robot who doesn't care about anything but himself and his fear of death. not to mention that the intelligence and cunning of the characters are completely questionable not to call them stupid.
ch 150 Chapter 147 : A Scheme Targetting Konoha
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
I understand the whole nature of the MC, but it's very frustrating how cautious and cowardly he is, very cowardly indeed. not counting the superficial relationships, it can be said that the guy has no consideration for anyone, not even his teammates, who stayed with him for 1 year, the MC and a literal robot.
ch 150 Chapter 147 : A Scheme Targetting Konoha
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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ch 69 God Will Forgive You
Anime & Comics · typicalanimewatchr
The comment dates back months, but I couldn't help but give my opinion. Let's go. Tobirama feared and respected the Uchihas. Fearful because they are an emotionally unstable, proud, arrogant, and reclusive clan that did not interact with anyone outside the clan. The Uchihas who did were extremely rare. Over 90% of the children from the clan who attended the academy ended up in the police force instead of the classic jonin team and 3 genin, due to the elders' insistence on preventing bonds with people outside the clan. When Tobirama formed the police force, he handed it over to the Uchihas to manage as they saw fit. Obviously, any police force receives a certain amount of hate from its population, but the solution was simple: the clan could have opened the police force to other civilian shinobi and other clans, but they did not. They preferred to keep the police force solely with members of their own clan. For example, the Hyugas, who are as reclusive as the Uchihas and in some aspects even worse, but their children are part of genin teams. Tobirama respected the clan's capacity to love and admired it, so saying he hated them makes no sense because Kagami Uchiha was his student. At most, he was cautious of the clan. Hiruzen never wanted the clan's death; he was even willing to let Shisui use Kotoamatsukami if peace negotiations with the clan failed. However, Danzo was always an extremist, and he orchestrated the Uchiha massacre not out of fear but out of envy, jealousy, and for their eyes. When the Kyubi attack happened, suspicion naturally fell on the clan, as the Sharingan appeared in Kyubi's eyes, and when some ninja from the clan formed a faction wanting to coup the village, the situation worsened.
Blazing eyes (Uchiha OCSI)
Anime & Comics · Ironwolf852