Just now seeing this comment, but thank you for the feeback! What part of the story has quality issues? Grammar, pacing, etc?
ch 26 Chapter 26: --- and Void
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I REALLY APPRECIATE THAT! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE KIND REVIEW!
MODULARITY: THE STATE OF BEING MODULAR. MODULAR: OF OR RELATING TO FIELDS HAVE A CHARACTERISTIC GREATER THAN ZERO. BASICALLY, SAYING THERES A SPECK OF A VISIBILITY.
ch 50 Chapter 58: Purposeless Proposals
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MORE SO UPDATED WITH COLORS BEING REFINED AND THE CHARACTERS (SPECIFICALLY OZ LOOKING BETTER)
ch 50 Chapter 58: Purposeless Proposals
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I'd consider the initial chapters pretty fast-paced while slowly introducing world-building elements. Many are hinted at, while some things will be explained later. Very observant readers may catch certain themes or have "ahah" moments if they're observant. Thanks for reading!
ch 30 Chapter 33: Persistently Silent - To the Touch
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR PATIENCE!!
ch 51 NEW CHAPTERS RETURNING ON FEBRUARY 13TH (3 DAY DELAY)
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NEW CHAPTER OUT NOW AND EVERYDAY THIS WEEK
ch 40 Chapter 48: Retributably Refined
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YOU'LL SEE, EVERYTHING HAS ITS PLACE, EVEN IF YOU MISSED IT BEFORE. YOU'LL HAVE THAT AHAHHH MOMENT SOON
ch 37 Chapter 45: CryBaby
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TRUST THE PROCESS MY FRIEND, I PROMISE I WON'T LET YOU DOWN ;)
ch 36 Chapter 44: A Burden To Break the Pack
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AYYY!! I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU READING AND THE POSITIVE REVIEW FAM! I'LL DO MY BEST TO MAKE AN ENJOYABLE STORY ALONG THE LINES OF WHAT I'D HOPE TO SEE IN THE STORY AND TRY TO IMPROVE ALONG THE WAY!
NIGHTMARE GLITCH
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