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Good idea, I would too
ch 55 Shoot the Works!
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Seems like a good spot to drop
ch 55 Shoot the Works!
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Selfishness leads to a life of self. Sometimes, you have to share goodies to grow up together with people around you to have a better life although it might hinder you at first.
When he was forced to the edge of the cliff and was about to fall down, he forcefully grabbed the rock and saved himself from falling. He stood there and planned his next move. He couldn't climb up once again, or Tian Ling would try to kill him once again, but he couldn't go down either. The cliff was too steep to climb down. He waited there then got a brilliant idea. He discussed it with Coin, and Coin agreed to it too.
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Das fine, no need to feel sorry. Thanks for explaining.
"Um, okay." Miles thought to himself. 'What should I name her?' He thought to himself. "Rayen it is then!" He answered after pondering for more than ten minutes.
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We all been there, no need to feel embarrassed. They do have the appeal when you first start them, but over time, 馃あ
"Brother Frog is stupid, he can't live with his half body."
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Because of the cuss word, the comment cannot be seen so don't know where you commented this on, but welp, if you are asking the name Rayen, no it is not a Chinese name. Also I mentioned it many times but they are all scattered, but anyways can go another time. All the chinese cliche's in this novel are kind of an author way of critic. I am not fan either.
"Um, okay." Miles thought to himself. 'What should I name her?' He thought to himself. "Rayen it is then!" He answered after pondering for more than ten minutes.
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To his friend? They are rare breed you know. Gotta appreciate good friends.
When he was forced to the edge of the cliff and was about to fall down, he forcefully grabbed the rock and saved himself from falling. He stood there and planned his next move. He couldn't climb up once again, or Tian Ling would try to kill him once again, but he couldn't go down either. The cliff was too steep to climb down. He waited there then got a brilliant idea. He discussed it with Coin, and Coin agreed to it too.
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If I am not mistaken, what you have is Wuxia Overexposure. Reading too much Chinese novel poisoned you and now you see young masters everywhere. Though gotta admit Wuxia novels over used this template and ruined it.
"Brother Frog is stupid, he can't live with his half body."
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There you have it then
ch 307 Three Layered Plan
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Haha! I truly hope so. I am getting quite a bit power stones from my initial supporters but don't really get much comment as you said. It is good to know there are people who are enjoying my creation. Thanks!
ch 261 Same Beginning, Different Ending
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Thank you very much! This means a lot. I helps me to find the energy to keep on writing!
ch 259 The Real Marooner?
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That is called "Hamartia," character flaw. It is a technique used since ancient greek. All of Shakespeare character has one as well. I don't mind constructive criticism but outright insulting irritates me. I could have just place Miles in there as well, it is not that difficult believe me, but this is planned. So please either be respectful or take your leave.
When he entered, the five looked at him. For a second, Miles felt hostility, but he shrugged it off as his imagination, but he still had his guard up. He walked to the side of Cody and waited.
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Fair. Thanks for the answer. Have a great one!
ch 26 Starve Cleric
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Thanks a lot for letting me know where you dropped. It means a lot. If you don't mind can you tell me why you dropped?
ch 26 Starve Cleric
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Give or take 50 chapters. The novel has a story-line that I have to strictly follow, thus cannot be any sooner. As for if its op or not, you have to judge it yourself but I can assure you, you will like it.
ch 226 O Cruel Fate
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They do not conflict but each art has compatibility with one of the four branches, making it miss match for others. Since Miles sees himself closer to Body Branch, he thinks alien's art is perfect match for him.
At the first level, it is still fine, but starting from F-Tier, when I circulate energy, arts are going to be at odds. Still, if I have to go with Body Branch, Exaltedness of the Creator and Moon Essence wouldn't suit it. If I have to name them, Seven Finger Death Punch is more suitable for the Body, while Moon Essence is for the Mind Branch. For Heart, Cross has Royal Blood Art that I refused to practice before because of Grandpa, but my talk with father changed my opinion. Exaltedness of the Creator on the other hand fits the mystic branch perfectly.
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And a strong superpower. Life is unfair.
"Thank you for showing mercy." Miles thanked and rose to leave.
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Thank you. I try me hardest 馃槉
"You are different. You are the worst of the worse." Milosh's straightforward words hit Miles like a speeding train, but he ignored them. "You do not possess an attribute at all. You also don't have a superpower and you only have physical power. I accept that you are better than anyone I have seen when it comes to physical powers, but that will not cut it at all.
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