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Moments 26
he cant do that, because in the end they have to work together. communication would be needed
"How many times did I tell you that my name is Ren and not bastard?"
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
ur going too far
I, the author should obviously know every character in the novel, but who in the world was Ren Dover?
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
and once his identity comes out wont she notice how everything just opened up for her ever since the reyes heir had first shown up? that would clearly show that it was always him not only opening up all doors but also sending an entourage for her welcome from the shadows... only she thought its all her efforts. why doesnt she find it weird at all that every time she faces even a small issue, within 24 hrs things end 110% in her favor....
"With a man like Cedric, I know I earned everything myself. I know that it isn't him pulling strings in the shadows. I know I'm succeeding because of my skills and not some man's last name." Adrianna hated the thought that if she had married someone from a powerful family everything she would ever get was because she was married to that man. She always wanted to prove to the work what she was capable of as Adrianna and not as some man's wife.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
also, i understand the heir's need to be down to earth and familiar to common life of struggles so as to know the value of the empire, but if even the younger ones and not allowed to splurge then what are they going to do with so much fortune? use as fertilizer? money is earned for using it, if its just left to gather dust then its not really worth anything rt.
"They've already spread it, haven't they." Cedric massaged his temples, his sister was going to be the death of him.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
well siblings always like pulling pranks and its not like it will hurt him or smthn. its basically a harmless prank to someone as established as him. why must ml only indulge his sweetheart? if he cant spoil his own loved ones rotten then would his power, money or influence even be of any use? they work hard to earn their own money and so have the right to spend as they wish. and none of them is characterless or stupid to run the family fortune to ground. and anyways, the family bonding of these 5 families is very strong. in a family, money earned is everybody's. theres nothing like 'my money' or 'your money'. the boys entertaining their sisters shows exactly this.
"They've already spread it, haven't they." Cedric massaged his temples, his sister was going to be the death of him.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
this is si dumb, you r just hurting her and letting her get humiliate over and over, tell her clearly already!
"They can sling dirt at me but never at my wife!" Cedric was angry. He never wanted Adrianna to get dragged into all of this.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
finally someone not blind! like really there have been so many clues ya know
"I've been around Mr. Reyes. I've seen the bodyguard that secretly follows you, he looks just as scary as the ones that follow your sister. Also it doesn't hurt to have an ally on the inside, for both of us." Jon said sticking out his hand.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
and there r supposed to be 13 watches. technically this should perfectly fit in cedric the husband and cedric the ceo both.
"Ayanna Reyes has one, that's three, I saw the actor Eric Chan has one too, that makes four, the Abad siblings have one each, yes I know Veronica is actually Anna Abad, so that makes six, three are with the Sebastian siblings, so nine, and one with Raymund Laurence." Jon counted.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
check chp 17
"That watch you wear, there's only ten of those." Jon said.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
the shopkeeper had said 13 though??
"That watch you wear, there's only ten of those." Jon said.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
if the readers didnt know these were the same person even they would find cedric's behavior rn very unsuitable for the situation and very illogical. no husband would let his boss get away with such a thing without even asking about it. i mean i get that he saved her but its not like she hurt her feet, you cant just bridal carry your employee's wife. theres smthn like the concept of a respectful distance. if i was adrianna i would actually be very disappointed at his lack of reaction and his casual, indifferent attitude toward this. like 'hello?? but i'm your wife, ya know? a stranger touching me didnt bother you at all??"
"He saved you Adri. Why would I be mad? It's not like he had any ill intentions towards you." Cedric explained.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
how is violence in office even allowed? arent there employee guidelines?
"Pathetic." Chris picked Cedric up by the collar and was about to punch him when he was interrupted by a new arrival.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
though her iq really falls when it comes to noticing reyes heir and cedric similarities, i really respect her of how much she is loyal to her husband and how fiercely she stands up for him. she literally does not mind offending anyone when it gets down to cedric's self respect
"Don't you dare touch me!" She shouted angrily.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
i personally think family is having each other's back. mere blood relations should never dictate who you see as your family, cause many times blood relatives stab you in the back while someone entirely unrelated might save your skin in worst of times.
"They are my family sir. If family might not mean the same to you, but I will never abandon my family." Adrianna answered back.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
how can a wife of eight years not recognize her own husbands laugh? when you laugh so involuntarily it would be a real, usual laugh. also she knows his height, hair length, hair color, is same. not only that even voice is same. like there cant really be so many coincidences! please dont let your iq hibernate only for this part!
Cedric suddenly burst out laughing. The Madams as well had an awkward look on their faces and Ram himself had a disgusted look.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
exactly. no decent parent would want their treasured daughter to marry a broke. it has less to do with their face and more with the fact that they want her to live comfortably without having to worry about money. specially someone as capable and beautiful as adrianna. at the end of the day its true that beauty doesnt fill stomach. they would be disappointed for sure, and i think her mother nagging her was just venting out her frustration that her so much more capable child got the shorter end of the stick. but since the very beginning though she hasnt been nice to cedric, it was not to the point of smthn extreme. and at the end of the day, them not liking cedric doesnt change the fact that adrianna is their only (i think?) child and differences aside they will always step up for her when needed. its like i can scold my child but the neighbor has no right to do that.
"I'm disappointed in you father, and you too Fredrik, Adrianna might not have married the type of person we all wanted her to marry, but you have no right to treat my daughter the way you just did."
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
ray is single child, two reyes, alex and his sister katerina, nicole, miguel, eric, ram, veronica, adrianna that makes it 11, did i miss someone?
"Yup! Eric Chan is actually the 6th prince, if you think about it. Didn't you see his watch?" Cedric asked.
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Realistic · wounded_warrior
yes and also sometime a single word gets used multiple times. it would be great if u could avoid that too
If I said I wasn't nervous that would be a lie.
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI