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Andrea_Feathers

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Reading is how I wind down at night.

2021-04-04 Joined United States

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His parents not her

Jack returned to focus on the files in his hand, while Erick quietly stood beside Jack silently. He did not dare to disturb the concentration of the master who was serious, even though Jack had known Sophia and her parents for a long time, but he did not know anything about their family tree. Because in the past, he was betrothed to Sophia by his late father and mother, Jack was not very interested in Sophia, so he did not make any investigations about who his fiancé was at that time. Jack had entrusted everything to his mother back then, and what his mother considered to be good for him, then he would agree. Finally, Sophia betrayed him a few months before her parents died in a single accident.

I'll Teach You, Marianne.

I'll Teach You, Marianne.

Urban · nafadila

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He is scaring her off. A bit possesive are we, Jack.

Without speaking, Jack then handed Erick's cell phone back. He then seemed to be sitting quietly, in contrast to a few minutes ago when he was grumpy. After confirming that Anne had turned off her cell phone, Jack finally sat quietly. 

I'll Teach You, Marianne.

I'll Teach You, Marianne.

Urban · nafadila

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I dont understand what makes what she said sound bad. Is it implying that it is more than a friendship?

"Aghhhh Anne, you're so stupid, why did you have to talk like that before?!!" Anne squealed in irritation as she covered her face with her palms.

I'll Teach You, Marianne.

I'll Teach You, Marianne.

Urban · nafadila

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The hers and his are still backwards. Her is she (female) and he is him (male).

"But what?Don't say you again have a condition?" Kelvin Kyle said placing both of her hands behind his head.That made his muscle bludged even more beneath the fabric of his shirt.

My Boss Is So Arrogant

My Boss Is So Arrogant

Urban · AnonnaRahman13

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So its his cousin but she is like a sister.

"Veronica,is a slightly spoiled kid.She is my mom's sister's daughter.Since we don't have any sister so she is like a sister to me and Ian.This year she reached her twenties.But she still acts like she is ten years old." Damien Kyle explained.

My Boss Is So Arrogant

My Boss Is So Arrogant

Urban · AnonnaRahman13

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Cousin or sister? Cant be both.

"Lizzy,let me introduce her to you.Her name is Veronica.She is my cousin sister." Damien Kyle said.

My Boss Is So Arrogant

My Boss Is So Arrogant

Urban · AnonnaRahman13

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This paragraph needs re worded. Really hard to understand what your saying here

"Last time you also said that while you sent the shooter to kill him.What happened?Instead of him,it's the shooter who needed to die.Fortunately I sent my men to kill him.They ran over the car over him either he would get evidence against me."He lit up a cigarette and took a puff.

My Boss Is So Arrogant

My Boss Is So Arrogant

Urban · AnonnaRahman13

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ConfIrm should be inform

"You are busy with shooting so Rose said to me not to confirm you!" He said.

My Boss Is So Arrogant

My Boss Is So Arrogant

Urban · AnonnaRahman13

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It will effect him or wont effect him? It reads both ways.

" Hey,woman!Whatever your name is!Now leave from here.You know what your this kind of slutty act will don't affect me."The man in front of her said in a very cold voice.

My Boss Is So Arrogant

My Boss Is So Arrogant

Urban · AnonnaRahman13

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This book is really hard to read wIth all the grammical errors. It really needs an editor. I'm guessing english is the secondary language of the author the way it reads?

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My Boss Is So Arrogant

My Boss Is So Arrogant

Urban · AnonnaRahman13

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