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Awesome story. Looking forward for more. How about establishing an outpost over the wall. Maybe Hardhome or the Fist of the First Men. He can build an fort or outpost to start tapping the resources of the Land of Always winter. He can keep an eye out for the walkers too

Awesome story. Looking forward for more. The only thing is please don’t start giving him superpowers and stuffs. He’s perfect the way he’s. Some strength here and there but please no controlling the elements or healing powers or some bs like that. Anyways good luck

Solarion. the Spear of Valor from Diablo

For glory’s sake, for vengeance sake…WAR!

Amazing chapter and story. I cant wait for more. For a divine weapon for Apollo. How about Solarion from Diablo series. Solarion can reside within the sun until Apollo calls upon it. Maybe he can have multiple weapons.

Awesome. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Just one thing, please keep it real or as real as Fast Furious gets. I was reading another story that i like and all of the sudden the MC started using magic and buying superpowers and skills. Just keep it grounded please. Good luck and take care.

“Let no joyful voice be heard! Let no man look to the sky with hope in his eyes! And let this day be forever cursed by we who ready to wake...the Kraken”. - Davy Jones

I love this bro. Looking forward to more chapters. Astrid has always been my favorite character of Crazy Rich Asians. Good luck.

Thanks for the heads up. Enjoy your vacation!

as always, your story keeps getting better and better. one thing that i was going to mention a while back was i don't like that there are other people with the title "king" within the empire. One King, One Emperor, One Kaiser. the dude from Prussia should be name Archduke or something. anything but king. The ones in charge of the colonies could be named Viceroys or Governors and they could serve at the Kaiser's pleasure. this way Berengar can just remove or replace them as needed. In the future he could even name one of his sons or daughters as Viceroy of a colony as a reward or training or punishment.

Omg. I can’t wait to see how Vince is going to stick it to JP face. Lol

Welcome back bro. I wanted so bad to comment about you please not abandoning this story, but I told myself "No". You need to have faith. He will be back. Good to see you again man. I hope that all is good. Looking forward for more updates. Take care

I love it man. For someone that has always been fascinated by roman history this is perfect. I hope that Marcellus has been restoring Rome itself during this time and once he has placed Hispania and Gaul back into his complete control, then he can ride into the Eternal City a conqueror. He can then assume the title of Caesar and declare that Rome is once again, as she once was. The Queen of Cities. The capital of the empire. The "Caput Mundi"(Capital of the World).

I like it. Let the European powers waste resources on the crusade. I would like some chapters just to be based on Germany. A full description of what has happen in the country. Infrastructure and monuments that they have built. In the north and south of the country. How big is the Imperial capital? What other cities has he founded? Did he build another palace? military bases? ports? stuff like that

awesome chapter. How about bringing later in the future the Department of Archaeology to the city Teotihuacan to bring it back to its formal glory. They can clean and restore the city. They can make sure everything is nicely preserved.

So good. I like the idea of a small cult like culture spreading throughout the imperial city. Kinda like Assassin’s Creed Brotherhood “the Followers of Berengar”. You could use the term Pax Germanica throughout the Empire as a way to stick it to the Pope and other kings.

Thank you for the chapter. Amazing as always. I don't mind moving forward but I hope that you take some time (couple of chapters) to do some world building around the Empire. Maybe some POV from the German small folks, merchants, foreigners and nobles. How about establishing some forts all around Africa, like the Portuguese Empire did? I feel that Berengar needs to establish another imperial capital with another massive palace in the northern part of Germany (like a summer and winter palace), maybe Frankfurt, Hanover or Berlin. Kufstein could be the official imperial capital, but he needs something closer to keep an eye out for the treacherous northern nobility. He can also build the famous Reich autobahn all across the Empire. Anyways good luck looking forward to for more.

Awesome story. I want more. Is there a way for you to commission a map of his territories. I want to see with my own eyes how big the empire is

I love this story. I feel that Berengar needs to establish more outposts or settlements in the New World. He could take over Cuba and turn it into a fortress island/city from where he can launch all of his future campaigns. I know you're saving the fifth spot for an Indian princess but how about a Chinese one instead. Google actress Dilraba Dilmurat, she's gorgeous.