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Morgana is the classic Merlin villan, so there will always ve people that want the story that way. For me, i like your approach so far. To me, she wont realy hate him for that, there had to be something bigger. Like she makes a bond with Maeve, when he leaves for school thenext time, and then he kills Maeve. But tell us your story, Maeve is a good villan.

True but, anyone under a restriction, spell or otherwise, will test the limits of that restriction to see what goes and what doesn't. Especially if he wants to tell the truth but can't. He would try to test what he can tell her that isn't a lie.

Don't get discouraged by such comments. Writhing 1000 words chapters dayly of original content, can't be easy on you. People are just used to get 3000 to 5000 words chapters from the translaion novels on this app/site. Keep up the amazing work. And you also writhe 1 or 2 storys parallel to this one. Respect

I personaly would have let the other guy win. He already showed his talent and would get the recognition from the order. But taking that honor from the other guy, who pretty sure worked so hard on that skill, is just mean. At least thats my opinion

Don't let those girls get stolen from you, Emery

I like it a lot so far, but please, Emery has enought on his platter with Klea, Silvia(?) and Morgana. He doesn't need that princess.

They shouldn't fight yet. Only in Camelot There he may even kill the father, but not the son

In quiet a few novels the MC uses Alchemy or his Apothecary knowledge to get an edge in Advancing over his peers. If he should become the Merlin, then he needs to be an expert Alchemist, but that is all up to you. Just wanna say, I love the novel so far, it should be more popular than it is. Have you given your early chapeters to proofread again, i remember many mistakes back then, which could discourage new readers. Might be worth the work.

And you concurred the world with 17 There are quiet a few storys where Merlin wasn't the fastest to master anything. But in the end he mastered everything

It is true, Merlin should outsmart his opponents and not simply overpower them. Still love this novel

@Autor are your Orcs more the beefy green skinned style like in World of Warcraft, or just green Pigman like in othe fantasy worlds???

Well writen chapter. Hopefully Emery, from your other story, gets his chance as well. He doesn't seem to be as mature as this MC. At least in this aspect

I hope the elven females are the better "training" partners for him