Webnovel Author: pocchari - Novel Collection

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Neve has a long road ahead of her...I hope you stick around for the ride :)

While this is not the type of novel I would usually read, I can appreciate the intrigue of the plot and the author's writing skill. From the first chapter, the author handles a lot of serious topics, but embeds lighthearted humour that makes the novel more enjoyable to read. Great characterization, nice pace. Overall, great work!

LOL I wasn't expecting all that dry humour! There were more than a few lines that made me laugh. The humorous narration was a nice juxtaposition against the darker elements of the plot. The story is moving a little quickly, but it's not too confusing. Overall, a very interesting start to a novel. Keep it up!

Wow, thank you so much! While I was drafting this story, it started to lean more political than romantic. Glad you enjoy the slow burn!

Me, a Liberal Arts major, trying to understand science...RIP. But seriously, this is a very creative premise! The writing is good, the characters are interesting, and the story world is clearly meticulously imagined. The only advice I can offer the author is to be mindful of long paragraphs, especially ones with fragmented dialogue. Appropriate paragraph breaks make for a more fluid reading experience. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes!

Definitely a gripping beginning! There was a lot of information and many characters being introduced at once, but the writing itself was descriptive and well-paced. The author paints a very clear picture with their writing. This seems like it will be a very interesting story!

This novel has a very captivating hook. Both of the leads are dynamic and their banter is enjoyable to read. The premise of the arena battle reminds me a little of the book, Red Queen. Though this novel has a fun (and less graphic) twist! However, I did find that the beginning was a little fast paced. The progression of events didn't seem realistic, and I wish I could've gotten to know more about Hope and her motivations before she was thrust into a new life with Drake.