only things I hate about it is it constantly repeats paragraphs, genders bounce along with names.
nope it gets worse
id rather the page end short rather then you feeling it by repeating it paragraphs over an over.
seriously you are a terrible author I'm not sure if your even reading the trash you are translating or not your constantly repeating paragraphs and parts of the story several times. Just despicable having us pay for this crapshoot that you call a story your just a lousy good for nothing piece if trash for releasing this terrible product.
repeated several paragraphs then suddenly it was all Chinese
you repeated yourself again
you repeated paragraph like three times. please stop trying to play sneaky tricks to hustle us of money.
when will new chapters be released?
I do love your story... but you could use an editor to look over it.
how does Phil and fai'er sound remotely alike
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