where the wind blows,imagination follows.
2021-08-06 Joined Uganda
well, thanks for the feed back. It's a little confusing, I apologize. Well, it's a draft . I hadn't realized that I had published but let me finish editing and rewriting and you will get it in it's better form. Also, thanks for the support. You'll get a mention 😉
ch 11 Chapter 11
Fantasy · inoe_lisa
better phrasing needed
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Fantasy · YTA_79
could have been phrased better
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Fantasy · YTA_79
Lovely first chapter. Really had me hoping for more. It's not your usual cliche start so, applause for you author/translator
ch 0 1 The Well of the Ultimate
Fantasy · Feng Yue
thanks alot[img=recommend]
I feel the minutes are too much
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Urban · priyabolagani
hehe, then I would have to comment again😉😏
But one of them known as Travas had his own plan to put the others under himself. When Zaraias knew of this he called on two beings from another world, humans, a couple that was bound by love. (Finally there we are)
Fantasy · kizitomayanja
i feel this would have been phrased better
But one of them known as Travas had his own plan to put the others under himself. When Zaraias knew of this he called on two beings from another world, humans, a couple that was bound by love. (Finally there we are)
Fantasy · kizitomayanja
thanks
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 2 INTERVIEW
Fantasy · inoe_lisa
Wow, author. Lovely book. What a twist to life! Very exciting plot though it would be better with better grammar. I know an editor who can help you out with that. Contact me if you are considering this option. but otherwise, nice book