DaoistIS9Y1T - Profile

Sometimes nothing is certain, it's fantasy. I see people creating too much trouble, just relax and enjoy reading.

I'm really loving it, I didn't see any flaws! It's a pity you discarded the story. But I will read until the last chapter.

I remember leaving a bad comment at the beginning, about many descriptions, unfortunately I can't find the chapter I wrote. I just want to say that I'm loving it, and having the fact that you described a lot of things in the beginning. Thanks Sorry

Sorry, but you describe so much that it seems to be lost. You repeat too many things you've said before, it's boring. Being too repetitive or describing things too much can make the story feel awkward. I like the story itself, but I get angry every time you describe the same thing or get into a context running away from what you were doing before.