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Isn't thay exactly where he's at?
The smell, it was pungent and was making Raze's stomach feel queasy, and there was the noise, the sound of people in pain, screaming, and sick. It reminded him a lot of a hospital, a place that was always close to death.
Dark Magus Returns
Fantasy · JKSManga
he doesn't know that yet
"The spell... it actually worked. I've been reborn!"
Dark Magus Returns
Fantasy · JKSManga
What? didn't the author say that they were all rank 2 when they first met FY?
"Hmph, I am only a rank one whereas you are a rank three and you have the nerve to say this. Could it be the grand Bai clan has no fairness?" Fang Yuan's expression turned ugly.
Reverend Insanity
Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
Why is everything being translated in past tense now?
‘Had a recovery chance of 11%. Many highly processed medicines are necessary.’ Zero reported, and listed a whole bunch of medicine names. There was no way for Angele to find those, and he probably could not help the baron right now. He took a deep breath, and sighed.
The Wizard World
Fantasy · Get Lost
Well, when you kill people indiscriminately, including your friends' loved ones they're betrayal probably shouldn't have been a surprise
There were three people following him in the back, and they were his best friends. But now the three were just trying to take his life away. The baron's face was getting paler and paler, and he was sweating heavily. Some of the sweats got into his wound, and he felt extremely painful.
The Wizard World
Fantasy · Get Lost
Wait, wasn't it made clear that the Baron was a cruel man right off the bat, why are they surprised now?
Being titled as “The Devil Baron” meant that the baron was all-powerful, yet mysterious, like a devil. People began fearing him, and they even started to think that Wade and Audis were evil as well.
The Wizard World
Fantasy · Get Lost
Now, how did the guards who are supposed to be vigilant while guarding the camp not hear him but a girl who's sitting by a lake who has no reason to be alert hears him?
As he started walking toward her, she heard his footsteps and turned around. With the bit of light coming from the moon, her eyes seemed black as she looked at him. Her brown hair slide over her shoulder as she turned her head. Thankfully, she wasn't startled by him approaching her like this.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
Could also have been lost in translation, authors 1st language isn't English, and it doesn't sound like they're using another translator.
As he already knew the general direction of Hazel's tent, he headed there and hid between the trees, looking for her. Several young people were patrolling, but they weren't that vigilant as monsters couldn't be stealthy.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
The correct word here would be stagnating. Using staggering(deeply shocking) wouldn't make sense here
Zigzagging through high-tier monsters and monster packs, Arthur hunted the unranked monsters he found. As he kept on hunting and absorbing, his stats began to rise before staggering again.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
I agree, there lacks consistency in the writing of the mc's persona and its starting to get real annoying.
As Arthur's thoughts reached here, he almost laughed at himself. What happiness was he looking for? The stabbing pain he felt when his father was gone returned. He had to shoulder everything for years, not experiencing friendships nor love in his youth, simply working for the pockets of the rich. He has long forgotten the desire to have fun or experience new things in life. He was robbed of that privilege.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
It seems like the author keeps hinting that Arthur's dad was some big shot before he died
Yet, in the end, the world didn't care for the disappearance of his father. The guild he worked for covered it, the government simply shrugging the responsibility off, and the whole world seemingly moving forward uncaring.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
It ticks me off that nothing is explained. like how did he go from studying rules to cooking meat for her. I mean, this story is told from his view but we muss out on almost all opportunities for character development and growth.
Hazel opened her eyes to the sound of sizzling meat. Even with her consciousness barely awake, her body was honest as her stomach growled. As if scared by the rumbling of a beast, the young man in front of her was startled. The two stared at each and Hazel took the time to study him.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
Since he was little? What child isn't naturally curious?
"So, brother, can you tell me why you transferred with only one semester left before the national exams?" Markus finally spilled the beans as he was dying of curiosity. If every person had a major flaw, then Markus's was that he was a curious person since he was little. This made him almost die several times, but Amelia was always there to save the day.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
yeah, no detail at all supporting that. I've noticed that there's a lot of missing supporting detail to this writing
"Thanks, I'm Arthur." Arthur sat down and kept chatting with him. He found this student to be easygoing and had a good personality.
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
He did not. it seems like the shop owner promised to give the items back at a suitable time to the MC without having to pay back what he owed
"I kept them maintained until now, as fresh as day one. Use them well, kiddo." Mr. Tate slapped the suitcase with pride and started caressing it as if it was his child. It seems his youth memories with Arthur's father were flashing in his mind as Arthur could see a wistful expression. Mr. Tate followed with a sentence that filled Arthur with pride and hope. "Your father is a good man."
Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
Now this is just some bs, he said he was worried about passing the exam bc he had only memorized 50 books, your saying that people who are able to dedicated their whole lives to the pursuit of knowledge can't remember 50 books worth of knowledge, especiallyan old scholar? This isnt even poor translation like some of the other weird errors, at this point, this is just sh*tty, lazy writing.
Even if he were to answer this paper, he wouldn't dare to say that he could answer every point accurately. After all, there were already many things that he didn't remember.
Immortal In The Magic World
Eastern · Blue And White Ocean
idk man webnovels auto translate is almost as bad, if reading this novel is any indication.
'it's so difficult. But if even I think it's difficult, the others must be suffering to death.' Kart sighed with confidence. She raised her head and was ready to check on the others.
Immortal In The Magic World
Eastern · Blue And White Ocean
Everyone also has to remember that this is an auto translated Chinease novel. Yes, this is wrong, but translation can already by lost in a convo between two people and this is between a person and basically google translate with no one to make sense as it's translated. I wish they actually had a translator, though
In this context, Eli waited for more than three months.
Immortal In The Magic World
Eastern · Blue And White Ocean
This isn't the best way to describe an ex smoker. I grew up with family members that had always smoked and they never acted like this. instead they are always looking for things to do with these hands, many of them turn to snacking on chips or other foods. anything to keep their hands moving. they don't act like this
"We had suspicions that there might be one, but in truth, the reason why we are here is related to another matter. It is due to the second goal of the Alter," Himmy explained and then motioned as if throwing something on the floor and twisting it with his foot.
Dark Magus Returns
Fantasy · JKSManga