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It’s great I’m on chapter 200 and it’s amazing for all who are looking at the comments to decide if you want to read it i highly suggest you try reading 10chapters and see if you can stop I started this book yesterday and I’m still in deep

Im addicted already, I really like the concept it new and refreshing. I Love the idea of improving the foundations for evolution. Please come out with more chapters soon.

I was enthralled in the beginning because I love stories about magic but about after chapter 50 the story got really really repetitive you have the mc fighting the same battles over and over again with the same lines and story as he previously went through and then once he entered the last door you basiclly copied and pasted chapter 97 on 99 it just seems you are doing filler pieces for more chapters and my Iinterest in the book is dwindling but I’ll read on in hopes.

Ive read further in and the story gets better and the mc gets a far greater depth to his story. im injoying the struggles in school and would recommend this book to others

I just started the book and I get that the main character is supposed to be op but you skipped over the whole development stage the best parts of a story. like when he was 5 just got magic then skipped to when his 12 and is a 5 circle magician. im still reading because It has an interesting concept but for future books dont use the word “impossible” Its way over played in fantasy novels and if you are going to skip time make sure you go over character development before hand so i dont feel like i missed all the cool struggles the mc has to go through to find depth of knowledge.