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Neutral lightning? Wouldn't that just be normal lightning?...

You do realize that geography isnt about rocks right? I'm guessing you might be younger then. Cause funny enough mineralogy and it's related fields arent a normal class, sure maybe an elective in some schools but definitely not the norm. (P.s. geography in highschool is about countries, cultures, and it's related histories, as well as environmental factors in relation to humanity, not about some random rocks and their properties.)

I know this is late, but you know that parallel worlds means worlds parallel to your own right? For an example dragon ball and say warhammer are different worlds and in almost no way parallel to eachother. The term 'parallel worlds' is oftenly used loosely and incorrectly to describe other worlds.

I'm confused, he gets the Assassin template but buys a sword, not a short-sword but a longsword. And longswords are not beginner weapons, they are very expensive compared to weapons that would be much more useful to an assassin like a dagger, tomahawk, or a short-sword. If the MC is so weak, then why is he single handedly able to hold back a hichurl by his mouth, while single handedly slicing the hichurls neck when practically laying against it? Not to mention the hilichurl doesnt fight back when it can easily overpower MC, and especially when its arms and legs arent constrained, not to mention he doesnt even have his sword equipped when "holding" it by the mouth. It's not possible unless he has a few dozen more joints in his arm, and actual strength.

Diablos is a herbivore though? They primarily eat cactus and arent hunters at all. The noios only use diablos as a defensive mechanism when feeling threatened, the screams only annoy and shock the diablos like a dog whistle, forcing them to go to the source, or jump up like a fish

When having the character monologue, especially from Dan's point of view, use apostrophes to differentiate them from active dialogue.

Man it's been a while since I've been on webnovel, and seeing the chapter count (which I cant fathom reading) I've decided to ask the real question to make up my absence. You may not remember me, but still; did the Beedrill horde come into existence?

Plot twist: fabrin is actually rykard, lord of blasphemy

Go damnit this took 30 minutes to write and its 3 in the morning

Quinn:

Some advice, many of the chapters felt off and amateurish (no offense) and I couldnt find out why until I realized, the transitions in between words, sentences, and actions could do better. Vocabulary could be updated, and some sentence structure is redundant like 'it is' which could be effectively shortened or just changed in general

If he doesnt grab a metal gear than hes maidenless