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GTCG_6320

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The last Heir

Fantasy · GTCG_6320

GTCG_6320

5mth

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Here's a pic of Sam

ch 0 4 Troublesome team up

The last Heir

Fantasy · GTCG_6320

GTCG_6320

5mth

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Here's a pic of Sam:

ch 0 1 The secret passage- The hidden truth

The last Heir

Fantasy · GTCG_6320

GTCG_6320

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Here's a pic of Adam:

In the attic, a young man dressed entirely in black, with mesmerizing blue eyes and white hair, could be seen tirelessly searching for something. It was none other than Adam himself. He had been scouring the attic for his old daggers for an hour, yet they remained frustratingly elusive.

The last Heir

Fantasy · GTCG_6320

GTCG_6320

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All*

[Al stats have been reduced by 70 percent]

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

GTCG_6320

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wait.. wasn't it redahields?

"What, but how?" Lippy said, "Is he part of the Sunshileds?"

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

GTCG_6320

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"You're not even worth hitting Peter, you disgust me."

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

GTCG_6320

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huh.. no comments? let me fix that

"What did you do that for?" Peter asked while running.

My Vampire System

Fantasy · JKSManga

GTCG_6320

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fullproof?

Those from the Nether Faction were just as shocked. Bill's expression was even worse since he was the one who told the young lady to challenge Grey since he was weaker. His seemingly foolproof plan seemed to be on the verge of crumbling.

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

GTCG_6320

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is he a dual elimenalist or does he have an other element?

Surprisingly, he was a Multi-Elementalist, having both the space and the lightning element.

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

GTCG_6320

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hmm... the other side, does he mean the secret realms or another worlds...... interesting.

'Could it be that the portal has been damaged and he slipped through? He might be a genius from the other side who came here to train.'

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

GTCG_6320

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I think it should I can

Klaus looked at her with a smile, "I told you didn't I? He will defeat them all. He's Grey, and I can't put my life in his hands, he will never disappoint me."

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

GTCG_6320

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assessed

Grey accessed everything and made the best decision he felt was worth a shot, and surprisingly, with the help of his shock factor, he succeeded.

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

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'The person with the most handsome friend wins.'

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

GTCG_6320

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The kick took her from one side of the platform to the other side. She screamed in pain once again. Grey didn't hold back when he kicked her, so she felt a sharp pain in her stomach.

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

GTCG_6320

1yr

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Grey on the other hand decided to employ Klaus' tactics, since he couldn't use his elements, and Lydia wasn't giving him the chance to get close to her, he wanted to annoy her so she would make a bad decision.